|Reviews for Water's Edge|
| Caerix chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
If were in that situation, either guard or prisoner, I think I would be seriously pissed at the guards taking advantage of the prisoners. I've got no use for power either so I'd have no reason to become a sadist. I definately would have snapped before roxas did, probably would've stole one (or more) of the weapons to fight the guards with (btw I have no idea what those look like) I think I can consider myself to be like this stories Zexion. But anyway, it was a really good story even if there wasn't a solid ending, it means I can make up my own and great job having an original plot
| Open Sea chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
this story was excellent. the drama and the pain very well executed. The ending was very good i think. Because, like you said, it could go any way.
But i did have a problem with one thing, the part where Zexion said 'no literature supports your hyppothesis.' or something like that. There is a philosopher did say that humans were born evil. I'm sorry I can't remember the name, but when i find out i will tell you. But other than that, i loved it.
Poor Demyx! Oh and i can't believe that Zexion let that shit happen! I mean he was going to call the cops! Why didn't he!
| rainbow cupcake chapter 2 . 1/28/2010
This was AMAZING O_O
Like, I am honestly really really impressed by this.
(And got the Lord of the Flies inspirations XD I was reading through and was like "Hey...this sounds like..." XD I just read the book last month, so :3)
And I'm sending this to my friend, because it's FANTASTIC.
| dekhram chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
That...was really kind of fucked up.
| xXBladeWolfxX chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
Damn! I really wanted to get some closure on this! Now everything's up in the air...forever. Excellent story, definately one of the best I've EVER read. And that's qite a few, let me tell ya. So, massive kudos, and awesome story.
| xXxRoxasxXx chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
You left me hanging here! where's the ending did roxas make it out of there? please PLEASE write a sequal! im dieing to know what happens to poor Roxy! Oh and if you do right a sequal make Sora kick Riku's ass! That would be great! So ya stories are never any good if you just leave them at a cliffhanger and I can never get the storie out of my head when there's a cliffy :( But ya all and all really good story keep up the good work!
| Loving-Em chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
Oh that's just plain mean... not cool at all.
I mean, its an amazing story! There has got to be a second part to this or something right? I mean.. .gah!
I really enjoyed it, which is weird cause I usually can't take angsty stories like this, but I was enjoying it, then I realized it was the end and there were no more chapters x.x (insert me freaking out here).
You are an amazing writer, and I'll definitely be watching for more stories (and hopefully and end to this one XD)
| Brit chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
that's it? theres no more? omg, I can't tell if I wanna cry myself to sleep right here at my desk or if I wanna bawl loud enough to break the windows! that can't be it. there are just too many possibilities! I mean, I like loose ends and all, but theres nothing here! I need more! TT
This is one of the most amazing things I have ever read, but the ending is nonexistant, and I can't just leave it there! Did he jump into the water, did he make it? Did Axel leave and pretend he never saw Roxas? Or did he pull Roxas out and take him back to the "jail"? is roxas dead, escaped, or still captured? I need something to finish it off...
if you would, email me and/or write more on this?
| Dying Kitty chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Well, i really liked it and was just getting right into it and it just stopped. Generally stories have a beginning a middle and an end... where's the end?
Other than that, it's great.
As mentioned by other people it reminded me of the prison study by Zimbardo.
| X-Alexius-X chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
That was realy realy good! I almost cried at some parts and I kept thinking of what I would do in that situation...mostly a riot was all that came to mind. Anyway your an awesome writer and you should keep writing. I wanna find out what happened after that!
| Caraglar chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Uhm...WTF? What the hell happened? I don't want to be a bitch but that was the worst ending ever. There WASN'T an ending. I mean...did Roxas make it...Demyx?...Xemnas, was he arrested...Dude horrible way to end a story w/ absolutely NO closure.
| Insanecat6 chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
That was so depressing. There was so much terrible stuff in it. And then you had to leave it as a cliff hanger. Urgh. Other then that it was very well written. It kept me interested and I had to keep reading till the end even once it got to the point that I figured out therewasn't enough of it left for there to be a happy ending. And you really brought up some complex emotions in this and were successful in conveying them very well. Especially how at least with Axel a part of him maintained to be disgusted with himself as the power alure took him over. I felt sick myself at that. Part of it is that I actually am sick but that just made it worse. I hope you continue to use your great writing skills in this fandom, though I hope your future fics are a bit happier. Love to you for this one. Bye.
| Oblivion Hyorinmaru chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
I Loved It
That Was Fantastic XD
| Sazzlysarah chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Psychology student by any chance? The parallels between this story and Zimbardo's Prison experiment are uncanny, save for the greater degree of sadism and the conclusion to the tale.
An invigorating read. Great job.
| Anon chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Amazing and moving, and the ending, I'm speechless.
I'm just now hoping for a sequel.