Reviews for The Good Girl
jk chapter 13 . 8/10/2015
WOW chapter seven was so immature!
was this written by a child? seems like it
jk chapter 10 . 8/10/2015
he fucks Tanya? ohhhh soooo gross! if a thousand dudes all stuck their dicks in a cup would you want any part of your body in that cup? i'll wash it out first?
hell no you still wouldn't do it...its the same same damn thing!
man cullens so dirty and used up in this story I don't want him anywhere near bella! AT ALL
jk chapter 5 . 8/10/2015
I hope Edward dies of vampire aids before he gets to bella...this should not be a Edward and bella story this should be a Edward and Tanya story...those two whores deserve each other!
jk chapter 2 . 8/10/2015
I'm sorry but what the fuck? you want bella with this whore? hes fucked EVERYONE ...hes been inside every damn girl in forks and you want bella with him? she'll just look like a joke! Like a whore! You want to do that to bella? You want to dirty her? Edwards gross in this story and I don't want him anywhere near Edwards used up nasty dick!

fuck that
JadeObsession chapter 16 . 10/3/2012
please update this some more, soonish?
Isabella Jame Swan Cullen chapter 16 . 10/23/2010
Love this story! It is so good! I really like the relationship Bella and Edward have! i can't wait to see what you do with that! Hopefully an update will be soon! I can't wait for it! This story is amazing!

Isabella Jame Swan Cullen XxX
dragonflyer30 chapter 16 . 3/14/2010
Wow ur ab impressive writer ! Are u goin to continue it ? U should !
Blue Arista chapter 16 . 1/20/2010
I REALLY like this story. Not only are Edward and Bella great, but I love Jasper and Alice in this too. They are hilarious! Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more!
puglover770 chapter 16 . 11/12/2009
Wow this story is definitely not normal. And I like it.
ugh chapter 5 . 11/7/2009
fuck alice! i wish there was one author who made alice shut the fuck up and mind her own business. i would have found a way to kill that bitch!
PENGUINS ON JUPITER13 chapter 16 . 10/26/2009
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

THIS IS ONE OF THE ABOSOLUTE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ ON FANFICTION! I LOVE IT! SO PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
Cullen Confection chapter 16 . 10/11/2009
Just found your story today. I can't tell you how much I have laughed! BTW, sorry for all your losses this past year but thank you for using your writing as an outlet. You will find your Edward one day!
trutwilightfantasy chapter 16 . 9/27/2009
Hahaha. Edward is such a dumb shit. I'm really suprised that Bella didn't get in his vehicle armed with Lysol and Clorox wipes after his sexcipade. But it's cool that she seems to breaking through to the perv.
BreGurl23 chapter 16 . 9/26/2009
hurry up with chapter 17 on the good girl !
AnimeVampires chapter 3 . 9/24/2009
This is really good!
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