Reviews for Mysterious Thing, Time |
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![]() ![]() try#2 Liked how you tied flashbacks into unspeakables. |
![]() ![]() Liked how tou |
![]() ![]() Thabks for this story. Based on AN, people asked about Black but not Pettigrew. Bit you also mentioned reasoms why Black needed to be out of the way. Q. Pettogrew? Dead or not? Q. Is Harry Lord Black, as in ring will come to him if he claims it? Q. Will Harry have earlier magical maturity? Seems his abilities and early magic use will "exercise, expand his core" far sooner than most? Q. Will every chapter focus on the injured hand? Liked that HP reqlized it was just started to feel better and unGriffondorly did not exasperrate his hand to please healer Bridge. LIKED Don the DE. Nuce twist LIKED unspeakables Q. Will HP have a pet basilisk like Spot from Adams family (or was it Munsters)? Enjoyed reading. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you show a new side of characters personalities due to the war grief in your time travel fics, the same went for Snape in "To Shape and Change", this time is Dumbledore, he is not the same soft old man who is doubtful to take a life anymore |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an absolutely fantastic story! Thank you to all three authors involvedI loved the OCs, the plot was perfect, and all characters written with so much personality. (I‘ve also never read Severus becoming the Flamels‘ apprentice, so that was super cool!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() chapter 7... there is a disturbing amount of OCs... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, thank you for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fun fic. Awesome job. Great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BTW I know it is stated in the chamber of secrets that it is a potion not the camera flash that make the "Magic Pinchers" move by Colin Creevy as told by a older student. Unless you just did not want to use that part of canon lose. still good through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! I had read this long ago and was so disappointed when it wasn't continued so am very grateful to MMEEMM and to Blueowl and Throckmorton too of course. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing story! Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! So long to write! Such a great story! Well done. |
![]() ![]() All through you wrote well but last few chapters were absolutely shitty and crap. |
![]() ![]() I have never hated this story before chapter 30. So much so I want to leave it and don't want to read. And I always hated that traitor and coward Xeno Lovegood. Blood traitortous coward deserves to be ABANDONED by his family and die a painful death. |
![]() ![]() What a disgusting chap 30. Hateful. |