Reviews for Mysterious Thing, Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. The modified "notice-me-not" charm reminds me of the miracle on Jim from Good Omens season 2. :-D |
![]() ![]() The not normal comments and the study him comments are making me hate where this story is going. Imagin if he was a real toddler and not a time traveller and those voltures already think of him as a scientific property to experiment as they please. They are hermionys on steroids, self entitled to information regardless of consent.. Not to mention the casual mind rpe of the baby |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great! Terrifying and sad but awesome. So glad you finished it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ignore my earlier review, I actually quite enjoyed the unspeakables. Great story overall! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read all of your HP ff and this chapter has been the first that I didn't like for some reason. Felt like a CSI, The OfficeHP crossover. Hope there's no more unspeakables stuff cuz it's downright boring as well as the characters rude/unlikeable. Story's pretty good though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love when harry and dumbledore aren't just at each other but actually work together. made even better by the fact that they share a bond. i love how we dove into the unspeakables and how they were all like wtf is up with these two. very well done. kept me engaged and wanting to read more. felt like the ending could've been fleshed out a little more but i'm complaining with what we were given and think it was good to have a tie up to everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what can I say to the death of Sirius Black? hm... ...ah, yes: WELL DONE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() kill Sirius...yes why not? I think the only cool thing about him, is his name. So better sooner, than later - I never liked the character per se :D Interesting story so far, I enjoy reading it, thanks for sharing :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you enjoy character torture and everything-that-can-go wrong-will, this is a story for you. The writing is skillful, & creative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dam man i have read your every complete Harry fanfiction all were better than most and most importantly were of my style |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very exciting chapter and some interesting developments. I am really enjoying the impact Harry and Dumbledore are having across the magical world. I also liked how Hogwarts she’s changed. Thank you for sharing your well written story |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really intriguing start. I like how Dumbledore is creating a better start for Harry. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful story you have written. |
![]() ![]() Story was interesting and entertaining, right up until there was a two year time skip. When they knew where Volde and his very few allies (at that time) were and the MCs both came from a future that turned to pure crap because THEY'D WAITED TOO LONG TO FIGHT BACK! Sorry but that just killed the story dead in the water. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s good to seee this story complete. I suspect that it suffered from the same thing I’ve seen in a few stories where Dumbledore either traveled in time or was thoroughly briefed by a time traveler: canon gets all lopsided and there’s very little reason that Voldemort wouldn’t be wiped out in a few months. We start seeing oddball improvements given to Voldemort to keep him around, which is hard to write and isn’t as satisfying to read as a more straightforward plot. If you come back to Harry Potter in the future I’d be happy to read it. |