|Reviews for Mysterious Thing, Time|
| bkerrmom1 chapter 27 . 5/16/2015
Just started reading this and I love the concept. Great idea.
| mab70 chapter 27 . 4/19/2015
Two quiet years? A bit out of character for the megalomaniac.
I wanted to see Umbitch go to Azkaban for the blood quill.
Jr an undersecretary? Yikes!
A small dragon is cool, but I think Harry's animagus form must be a Phoenix. Nothing else explains reasonably to me why he survive that first AK, in the books too.
The killed, cursed, sealed, and buried (yuck!) is that how inferi are made?
This is a great story, I really hope RL & both your muses allow you to return to updating. Especially as the climax seems pretty close.
| mab70 chapter 26 . 4/17/2015
I guess Voldy has overcome his previous magic issues.
The two scenes with AD & HPD were very cute, nice breaks from the madness.
The ministry seriously needs better security!
| mab70 chapter 25 . 4/17/2015
"There was no reason to hold a grudge against the dead." - the most profound statement of the changes in the timeline.
I'm very glad Albus fixed up Harry's parents house.
Hmm, didn't know Abraxus was alive. His response ought to be interesting. If I was Draco, after seeing my mother try to AK me, I wouldn't want to be alone with her ever!
| mab70 chapter 24 . 4/17/2015
That was AMAZING! A SIX way fight for Harry's life! Never read anything like it! And Jess pulling the soul piece out with her hands! I LOVE that voice, whatever it is. And it stopped Voldy from killing!
I missed something somewhere, I had ruled Narcissa out as "Master".
Whew, this chapter was quite a ride!
| mab70 chapter 23 . 4/17/2015
Albus' consciousness and magic inside Harry is something I have never seen before! I love the twinkle and gravitas coming from that little boy.
Wow! It seems using Harry's blood was not such a good idea.
People should really start to notice how Luna sees what is happening before anyone else.
| mab70 chapter 22 . 4/17/2015
I'm glad Snape won't have to spy, but how much can Voldy make him suffer through the mark?
Were both attacks mainly attempts to get Harry's blood?
It's too soon, a 6 year old doesn't have the strength to fight that monster.
I hope Lily's wand blows Voldy's hand off when he tries it!
| mab70 chapter 21 . 4/16/2015
Anna might reach the right answer, if she can push the emotions away.
Is a returned Bellatrix the "Master"?
| mab70 chapter 20 . 4/16/2015
Okay, the vampires had weapons from the future. So, maybe their "Master" is from the future. But who?
| mab70 chapter 19 . 4/16/2015
Meant to comment on the "voice" Harry heard. At first I thought it was Riddle's soul fragment, but then you said female voice. So now I'm guessing Lily.
Okay, never touch Jess is a life rule.
Love how the bad guy wanted to surrender!
I'm really hoping the toad is going down for abusing Remus & Elric.
| mab70 chapter 18 . 4/16/2015
Yay, Mooney's back!
She HAS to be in on it, if not ordering the hit.
| mab70 chapter 17 . 4/16/2015
Loved the little glimpses of Harry & David playing, also good to see Hagrid.
Thought Draco's introduction went well.
Shocked Narcissa could wear the locket to Hogwarts, wouldn't there be a ward to exclude dark artifacts(i.e. no repeat of the incident with Katie Bell)?
I had hoped Crouch Jr. was one of the dead Deatheaters.
Hmmm, the Master is female. If it isn't Narcissa, is it Umbitch?
| mab70 chapter 16 . 4/15/2015
Thought I had the bad guy figured out, apparently not.
But if she's been wearing the locket, maybe the soul fragment is taking over without her knowing.
Love Harry & Neville are besties!
Fiendfire sword-wielding vampires are quite the plot twist!
| mab70 chapter 15 . 4/15/2015
It's got to be Narcissa behind the attack, though if the vampires want something other than money, I wonder what she offered them.
Loved Harry roping Flitwick in on a prank!
| mab70 chapter 14 . 4/15/2015
WHOA! White knuckles, heart pounding, eye popping WHOA!