Reviews for Mysterious Thing, Time
animaluvr123 chapter 12 . 6/10/2009
shhIwasn'there chapter 8 . 6/8/2009
I have just started reading and I usually don't comment until I have caught up with the story but this chapter contains a huge mistake, that being that Snape was a death eater at the time and that he was in the same year as James so he will be long out of Hogwarts by now and it's time for him to come to Dumbledore for repentance for telling "Baldie Bad" about the prophecy!

ok now I'm off to reading the rest of it.
Rainey Dae chapter 12 . 6/2/2009
Awesome! I love stories where Harry doesn't fail at magic. Luna's great. Sirius died on Halloween anyway, he just kept walkin' around in cannon, so no qualms there (mind, he's one of my favorite characters, but I won't deny the poor bastard's better off dead-especially considering how things went after Halloween. Went... will have gone... willen have go (Douglas Adams' invented tense used specifically by time travelers. Brilliant stuff. Anyway...) ) so yeah, update soon please! Hope to see some freaky cool hand of magic/ runes stuff/ Unspeakables/ loads of little luna lovegood. I'm personally not all that into Dumbledore's PTSD, but whatever, not my story, write as you will.
jjones987 chapter 12 . 5/30/2009
anouther amazing chapter cant wait for next this story has gone u in my ersonal list now rated number 1:)
Folfette Dreamwalker chapter 12 . 5/29/2009
Ah, a time travel/super!Harry fic. Very lovely and well done too. It is too bad about Sirius being gone in this fic...but we all know what was/is important about that. You guys have a very interesting tale going on here. I will read this until it is done. I will also favorite it.

~Folfette Dreamwalker~
EDelta88 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
“Then who?”

Luna gazed up at her, as if confused her mom was so interested about knowing something so obvious. “Himself.”

acacia59601 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Okay, I'm betting Rebekah is now officially creeped out... Update when you can, this story is great!
David M. Potter chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
I love this chapter. I love how you are developing the characters. BRAVO! I especially like Luna/Harry and Luna her mother interactions.
Yaraslava Rada chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Wonderful chapter! Update again soon please!
EiramsS chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
I think this chapter moved things along nicely. It's a really good story, one of my favorites. In fact all your Harry Potter stories are on my favorites list.
Rhett1980 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
I've enjoyed reading this fic. One mild criticism would be that you seem to make these Unpeakables almost or in some cases more knowledgable than Dumbledore. AD is the most powerful wizard in the world, 120 odd years old, and with probably the greatest mind in the wizarding world and yet you make him seem lost to some of the stuff the unspeakables do.

And hopefully if you make Harry powerful, as it seems you will, don't make him ridiculously powerful. He only has to be as powerful as Voldemort, who is NOT more powerful than AD.
Hedwig Edwiges chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
I think you're doing a great job. This is really interesting and enjoyable.
Wonderbee31 chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
That was an interesting part with L'il Luna there at the end, and going to be curious to see what else might happen with her and Harry, as well as more of the other young people Harry might end up meeting later on.
Jane chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
I love it.

You know, you can write that this story is not slash but it won't deter people from asking/demanding or saying that "your story is ruined". omg and I DID read that the other day. o.0

Anyway, I love the plot things. Particularly the ending scene. I always wanted a Harry/Luna ship, because I was never fond if Ginny. But it doesn't matter, EXCEPT will Harry be in Ravenclaw now? I mean, being so intelligent it might change things around. idk
AmethystSiri chapter 12 . 5/28/2009
Great chapter, little!harry is so cute :) I can't for the next chapter, please update again as soon as possible :)
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