Reviews for Fleeing the Darkness, Finding Family
Almia chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
A good story. My only criticism is your choice to sports. It is obvious that you grew up in America and don't really get how sport is in the rest of the world particularly England where the story is set. Everywhere in the world other than American soccer football. When the word football is said it means soccer a game you actually play the other your feet. Not the American game played with your hands holding the ball. Also if this was something England Dudley wouldn't be playing American football as it is not a popular sport by any means anywhere in the world other than America.
Brittanie chapter 4 . 10/2/2015
The tribes reservation name is La push
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
imBored09 chapter 6 . 7/5/2015
Is Harry ever going to grow taller?
SmilingAnne chapter 6 . 5/23/2015
Hes, I know you doing thinks in your story your wayand I don't want to criticise that. But because you forgot I am writing you either way. In breaking dawn Bella goes to the Cullens... well lets say "private lawyer" who is human, but does know enough to be afraid of the Cullens and doesn't say anything about theme to get Nessies and Jakes fake papers in case they have to run from the Volturi.
Nice greetngs

Sin Ouroboros chapter 6 . 6/21/2014
This story is really good im looking forward to a update
jenn008 chapter 6 . 6/26/2013
Update soon!
denvitadroppen chapter 5 . 4/28/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
The tribe's name is Quilete (sp?) and their reservation name is La Push. :)
Rebecca Potter chapter 4 . 10/11/2011
The reservation is called Quileute
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 6 . 7/5/2011
keep going its good
crazyme03 chapter 6 . 3/12/2011
Great story so far. It's different, having Harry have a brother. I hope they meet eventually.

I know it's been a while, but I hope that you continue.

Thanks for sharing.
Hotgirlow chapter 6 . 1/20/2011
update soon it's great.
moonprincess97524 chapter 6 . 12/5/2010
I love this story so far. I love that Harry was able to have a Happy childhood, in a way that is something for Harry to thank Lily and James Potter for having him live with his Aunt and cousin. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
MLEetc chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Wow! I really like this, great idea! I do have a couple questions though. In Harry's thoughts he was saying that he made the scary man go away (Voldemort), so if he was the one who "killed" Voldemort, then why is Brad the boy-who-lived? I still don't really understand why Harry had to go away.

It's really sad that Petunia and her family died, and it's sad that no one knew about Harry for his whole life. And who was the man with the hood? Or woman? ...Or magical creature? Lol you never know with these kinds of stories. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Also it was sort of difficult with the length of the chapter to keep my attention for very long. I know you've already got six chapters up but maybe for future reference or for different stories.

Anyways. Hope some of this helps. You can message me and reply if you want to. :D
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