Reviews for Lines
falsedfaith691 chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
This was so freaking good. Thank you for writing it
SilverOwls chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Loved it :D
bloodshound chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
again a good hard hitting story. damn u got talent.

*is thoroughly envious
Kamaete chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I think this is awesome. Really. Kittens: cute but annoying. Cats: pretty and self-sufficient. Puppies: Adorable but potty-challenged. Dogs: Lovable and Loyal...
Victor: probably likes kitty-ramem?
Honey: probably has claws of steel?
:D Who named them? Victor sounds like a Sasuke name and Honey sounds like a Naruto name? XP
I'm a Honey fan, lol.
Cedevita chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Wow, amazing.

Thanks for writing it.

It was very nice to read a fic where Naruto really seriously wants to leave Sasuke XD
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Ah, it's about time Sasuke was the one who made a horrible mistake and had to suck up his pride to apologize. I thought it was sweet, and hopefully he never tripped over that line again. Almost seemed to me like Victor also symbolized Naruto, as Sasuke wasn't willing to give him any affection yet he still came back to him.
Chugga Chugga Choo Choo chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
That was so heartwarming, seriously, I actually adored it. :)
MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Really great work on this!
xrosepetalsx chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Cool, if cat’s is going to be reoccurring I’ll love you forever XD Not that I don’t all ready, you do really good in your writing! LMAO he call’s it a rat…the poor cat. Good point with the welcoming mat XD Oh, I get it, they both have their own cat’s and there mean to each other’s cats lol. LMAO it’s just like Sasuke, that’s classic. O_O wow…he broke the table…what an idiot lmao. Wth? Sasuke wont let him go? What is WRONG with him. Omg, he kept having to repeat the boyfriend part, I can just hear him saying all that. Aw…he hurt Naruto. What an ass! Yes, the ups and downs of their relationship. So I guess this happens about daily then. O_O Uh-oh, Sasuke made a BIG mistake. OMG he slapped him…like a woman would…Omg hes like…serious! :O I thought he was seriously going to hit Sasuke and Sasuke was seriously going to take it! Aw poor Sasuke. He can’t survive without Naruto. He needs to learn not to walk all over him…Omg he almost just got in the car! Omg what is wrong with him! He doesn’t want to leave, does he just want to get what he want’s and he’s knows Sasuke will do this? Or does this happen on a daily basis or whenever anything bad happens. Lmao, yes Sasuke, find that line. I loved this, surprisingly, it was quite fun to read XD

Midnight Mourner

They'll never

know who I am
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Dranatic-Snitch chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Hey, congratulations on your baby girl! I'm really glad to see that you're writing again. I loved this story, really engrossing and realistic, I could see the conversations being played out in my head. I was even doubtful that they'd resolve their little spat until almost the very end, so well done.

Good luck with your daughter, and I hope to see some more of your work soon )
Azamiko chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Very tense. Happy ending though.
Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I loved this fic... It was different (in a great way) from the constant smut in every damn story I read... xD Here's a fic and it's sequel you should read (NaruSasuNaru). They are pretty awesome, all of Zrina's fics are xD Try and check them out, but here is one of them and it's sequel.

... The Sound of Dreams:

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& the sequel...

... Dreams of Fire:

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(remove the spaces)... Zrina's really good at keeping them in character so I liked them a lot, asnd cuz you kept them in character very well, I think you'd like these (and the other fics from her that you can all find from LJ as well, through the links that appear on the fic pages)...

I especially loved in your fic how Sasuke kept subconsciously constantly calling Naruto with rude names like idiot and etc. xD It was funny hear him trying to apologize while belittleing him and calling him names... I wouldn't be so fast to forgive him eighter if he did that to me! xD Keep writing... You're a really good writer...

sasodei-iz-awesome chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Omgosh I certainly hope you're havong help with Baby A! If I could, I'd be right there but then that'd seem kinda stalkerish wouldn't it... Heheh... -_-'... Anyways, WOW! This was pretty kool! :)

Peace, love, and all that shit...


P.S. -waves rapidly to baby- Hi baby! :D
The Jasper Raven chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
woot! i was so excited wen i saw u submitted a new fic! this was fabulous! u hav so many sweet sasunarusasu fix there all fabulous oneshots XD i wasnt gonna ask this but i just hav 2 its been killing me! since ur trying to make a return to fanficdom...does that mean u mite update haunted soon? im sorry i just had 2 ask XD im glad ur lifes goin good and congrats on the baby XD cant wait 2 read more from u XD
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