Reviews for Smoke and Mirrors |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love you and this story! I would be thanking god right now for making you born a writer this good if I believed in him. Great Story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent and thanks for writing. I liked how you wrote the relationship between Jack and Renee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will the baby be healthy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo, Well Done, A |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey... I still reading your story...I'm just asking what is going to happen with Jack and Renee being a real marriage and fathers... Regards... |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I'm Jack Bauer. I can fix anything." I love it! Please continue, this was phenomenal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Was this the last chapter? YOU MUST MAKE A SEQUEL! I your story so much. Excellent work. This has helped me keep sane while I wait for S8 to start. You started it pretty early into S7, I think your's was the first Jack/Renee fic out there, and you did a wonderful job! I remember when I saw the begining of S7 I just knew those two had to hook up. Then i got curious to see if anyone made a fic about them yet! And BAM I found you! I remember reading it when you were still on Ch. 2 :) Anywho! Sequel, make a sequel, a sequel must be made! P. S. - Awsome work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will it be a boy, or a girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice and romantic story there and thank you for updating it. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter. It was worth waitng for. Always a cliffhanger though! Can't wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() write faster, and keep writing. |
![]() ![]() Fantastic script. I'm absolutely hooked and can't wait for an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just. Read. Whole. Story. In. One. Sitting. All I can say is WOW! I am in love with it! Keep up the freakin' awsome work and update soon! |
![]() ![]() it took a LONG TIME, but I'm glad you're back. This can't be the end of the story. really, good job. |
![]() ![]() Well you scared the daylights out of me when I read Jack was shot. But the more I read I felt better. I love the dynamic of Jack and Renee...the banter, tenderness, love, etc. It is a great story and can't wait for the next chapter. |