| Reviews for Smoke and Mirrors |
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   Phoenix Falconer chapter 20 . 7/14/2009 FINALLY! Wow, that was a great chapter. Larry's an interesting character...wonder what's going to happen to him, hmm? And I like the way that Jack understands where Larry is coming from (thinking that he has to protect Renee from Jack). It makes Jack seem more human. I also love the threats Renee gave to Jack. Hah. Update soon! Please! |
| June chapter 19 . 7/11/2009 I hope yu put the next part as soon as possible. |
| June chapter 19 . 7/10/2009 You fic is great. I have read it most than twice. It would be great if you continue. |
| Maverick500 chapter 19 . 6/24/2009 Who was shot, Remee, or Jack |
| fox4mel chapter 19 . 6/24/2009 Ack! You can't leave it here! Brilliant cliffhanger, but don't leave us here too long! |
| raditus chapter 19 . 6/24/2009 As always, you did a great job! I loved this chapter as well. |
| Read24forfun chapter 19 . 6/24/2009 I can't wait for the next chapter. Renee doesn't pull any punches and is keeping it real. I liked Jack going to Terri's grave to get some closure. Love the story! Hope you update us soon since you left us in suspense! |
| Melodic chapter 19 . 6/24/2009 Another excelent chapter! Your story is one of the once I can't wait for the next chapter to come up. I love the way in this chapter you showed the agent side of both Jack and Renne. The point of him needing to go to Teri's grave was really realistic also. :D |
| goodbye my love chapter 19 . 6/23/2009 very good chapter and i can not wait for the next chapter to come up. how dare you leave it like that tho. haha. thanks and take care, Anne |
| Phoenix Falconer chapter 19 . 6/23/2009 Holy shitake mushrooms. You're killing me here! First, I was crying my eyes out during Jack's soliloquy. Almost as bad as when Jack was giving Renee advice. And now I'm on the edge of my seat! Update soon-does Larry die? Loved him in the show, in your fanfic though, he's one son of a gun. (almost literally) Cheers! Phoenix |
| Maverick500 chapter 18 . 6/19/2009 Will Jack work with the FBI |
| raditus chapter 18 . 6/18/2009 This chapter blew me away - in a good way. I saw and felt that it was charged with emotions and it really touched me. As always, the dialogue was great! I love where the characters are going. |
| goodbye my love chapter 18 . 6/17/2009 very nice chapter and i can not wait for the next chapter to come up. thank you for the update too. thanks and take care,anne |
| Cool Hwip chapter 1 . 6/15/2009 Great story, please consider coming back to finish it someday! |
| Maverick500 chapter 17 . 5/30/2009 How will Kim tke the news of the baby |