Reviews for Smoke and Mirrors |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good chapters...'ve been away so i've been missing the action of this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. Is Renee pregnant |
![]() ![]() thats what im talkin a bout! make that motherfucker pay for what he did to renee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was fantastic! I loved the emotional scenes-well, basically the entire part about Renee reminiscing about Jack. Very well written-UPDATE ASAP. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Those two are great together. She really gets him. Keep em coming! Can't wait to see if Jack stays. I really hope so! |
![]() ![]() I love these two together! You make it happen so naturally and believably in your story! Please continue, it's so great! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY SHITT! THIS IS THE BOMB! I SWEAR IT HAS TO HAPPEN IN THE REAL SHOW OR I WILL DIE! YOU ROCK THIS STORY SWEETIE ALL MY LOVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy hell. Jealous of Renee much? But putting that aside, I have to say that even while you keep the tone relatively serious here, I love your little one liners that crack me up every time, such as, "Nothing I want to turn off." It's awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. Will Jack leave in the morning, or will he stay with her |
![]() ![]() Great update |
![]() ![]() Loved the chapter. I really like the chemistry Jack and Renee have here. The back and forth and the fact they can't stay away from each other. Keep it coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this! Keep going! LOL His cell phone just HAD to ring. ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great! like Tony...the tiger, silly! hahaha jokes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FUN FUN FUN Please (Sir) I want some more? |