Reviews for The search for the lost Princess
kateydidnt chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
could you please learn how to capitalize and punctuate properly?
kayarocks01 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
lol thank you i realy dislike mai that totaly just made my day
ell25 chapter 4 . 1/19/2009
Aw wow well I wasn't expecting Nai to be a girl :O And now that Zuko is like what happened to my mother over the years, it's getting much more intriguing ] Can't wait for the next chapter
ell25 chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Hey, you're probably tired of this (I don't how many people have said anything about it) but you're grammar, punctuation and spelling needs improvement. MS Word should be on your computer, so use that and it will pick up you're spelling errors...but not words like possessive pronouns.

Remember to use a capital letter for proper nouns and especially after a full stop! Doing this will improve your writing a whole lot more.

On this second chapter whenver there was any dialogue your speech marks has a space before someone speak eg. " Hi, Zuko." It should be "Hi, Zuko." That's not a major problem

Your structure is sound. Nothing to give any constructive criticism on :)

And I love the sotryline. It's solid, and I think you have a great plot. Just try to fix your errors or get a beta to help you out :) It'll improve your writing ten fold. Can't wait to read more!