|Reviews for Second Chance: Take Two|
| Rosa Mundi chapter 6 . 4/6/2011
"Not at all," she sniped caustically once she recovered. "I'm quite certain there's no one there I'd be remotely interested in."
Hee again! I am very much enjoying this.
| Rosa Mundi chapter 5 . 4/6/2011
"So He'mione's out?"
Hee! :) 3
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 32 . 3/2/2011
Both men were caught up in a sports game on the television and to Hermione's shock, her dour Potions professor was shouting colourful imprecations at the players on the TV right along with what her father was shouting. Anna clapped her hands over her daughter's ears and hustled her into the kitchen.
Aww, adopting little Harry.
"...if Dobby is available for a play date." Imperceptibly his eyes rolled and Echo just laughed.
Well, you don't see THAT sentence every day. :)
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 31 . 3/1/2011
just walked away leaving his father to talk to himself.
- Hah! Glad to see you continuing the idea (my idea too) that Petunia was really the perpetrator of all the ill will towards Harry.
Severus blinked and sat up straighter. "Uncle?" Harry nodded. "I hadn't thought of it, but I suppose that since he is your cousin, that does make him my nephew." He grimaced. He wasn't so certain he wanted to be at all associated with the Dursleys.
Ye gods, poor Sevvy.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 30 . 3/1/2011
Oh lordy . . . they've misplaced Harry.
Severus has ordered lemon sole stuffed with king prawns in a Seville orange sauce and samphire.
Er, had ordered?
He was strongly tempted to find someone to Bind himself and Echo so he could take her home and. . . .
Oh my. Such a naughty potions master!
"He followed that walking carpet about twenty minutes ago, Albus," supplied Phineas Nigellus Black.
"Severus was fighting for the side of Light, you viperous harridan!" Echo shouted, getting in the older witch's face. "Your husband was getting rich on the misfortune, misery, and deaths of innocents!" Echo grasped an ostentatious, triple strand of pearls about the woman's throat and jerked. The pearls went flying in all directions.
And this is how a cat fight is started. lol
Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, sir."
Severus blushed in embarrassment.
Dobby shook his head as his cheeks colored a bright green. He then looked upward and whispered, "I take care of Master Harry, Master Harry Potter. You be happy now." With that sweet sentiment, he vanished with a pop.
Ack, my eyes just filled with tears.
If he wasn't to touch them, why did his grandfather have them right where he could reach them?
I've often thought the same.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 29 . 3/1/2011
Harry, standing on his dressing stool, combed his father's hair while Severus fixed the white silk cravat at his neck.
That's so sweet!
He had planned to wriggle away, but she smelled very pretty, too, so he allowed her to kiss his cheeks.
Harry frowned. "It's a grown-up thing isn't it?" Albus nodded. "Those give me a headache.
And hector! AGH!
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 28 . 3/1/2011
Minerva is visiting her neice's family,
- just a typo!
The old wizard danced a little jig around his office and then dashed up the stairs to his quarters. He was very happy for the wizard he called son.
"Don't tempt me," he whispered back, kissing Echo breathless.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 27 . 3/1/2011
"Daddy? Can we rest? My legs are getting all runned out."
That's so precious! ACK.
"Don't be facetious," Severus said archly. "I am only 38."
Wait, but at the beginning of the summer he was only 36!
There was that bucket of ice water down his back again.
But it wasn't again, b/c the first time it was down Harry's back and this time it was Sev's.
What I don't understand is why they could just apparate back?
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 26 . 2/28/2011
"Mum had this in her broom closet. She'd make Harry use it to sweep up the kitchen and back porch. It would make him cry."
It kind of makes me sick to my stomach.
His dark eyes glittered wickedly, "And with kisses?"
Awww, I like the hopeful Sevvy. :)
"I love her and want to keep her forever!" he stated very firmly.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 25 . 2/28/2011
"Fireworks," he said in his silkiest, most menacing classroom voice. "You do have them, don't you?" He put down his son and was now looming over the fallen twins.
OMG it's like Scrooge at the end of the story! You know, the turkey? The big one in the window? Buy it!
It looked to him like his father was getting him a mother, which meant he'd be a big brother very soon.
"That's worse than swearing, daddy," Harry hissed. "Why did you do that?"
Harry pinched the bridge of his nose, closed his eyes briefly, and did his best to make sense of this.
lol - that's totally a Snape look!
A stricken look came to Harry's face and Severus' heart felt as though it were about to plunge off a cliff.
- eep! Aww. *sniffles some more*
Harry leaned over and kissed his father's cheek. "Don't worry so much, dad. You'll get wrinkled."
Perfect line! Wonderful line! I love you . . . still. lol
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 24 . 2/28/2011
I couldn't be in trouble, could I? For Merlin's sake, I'm a grown man!
Remus chuckled softly at the unerring, and simple logic, of a child. "You're quite right, Harry."
I still use that logic sometimes. I think it's an aspie thing. :P We're more open to different people because we don't see the differences.
He looked up into Lily's beautiful eyes and he nodded. "When he smiles or laughs, I can forget. When I read him his favorite stories at night and know that his sleep is free from nightmares, I am not plagued with nightmares, either.
And there go my tears again.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 23 . 2/28/2011
He began rocking her gently, never realising that he was softly singing the lullaby he would sing to Harry when his nightmares threatened his sleep.
AWww, love a singing Snape.
Echo smiled softly. "Your voice is magical, Severus." He coloured lightly and looked away.
And love a blushing Snape too!
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 22 . 2/28/2011
Severus had been smug at Albus' initial defense, but to threaten to end such a long established friendship over him struck him deeply; it warmed his soul.
"Thank you, Albus," Severus said softly, only for the ears of the Headmaster. "Moody, if you wish to stay for dinner, you're welcome to." As he turned to go into the kitchen, the look of utter shock on Mad-Eye's face was priceless.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 20 . 2/28/2011
Oh the baby Harry scene was a bit like the one in your Nobody Cared story.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 18 . 2/28/2011
Harry scowled right back. "Then stop kissin' Echo because you know that makes babies!"
- I echo Echo!
In the Marseilles, France Floo Station, the always graceful Potions Master lost his balance and fell clumsily from the Floo.
- Oh I think I love you.
And Lupin - yes I remember how he wasn't answering Harry during that fateful summer prior to his deaging.
Severus shifted his little leech so both of them would be more comfortable.
- aww, his little leach. That's so sweet (but only coming from Snape). lol
He wondered if the man was going to get teary-eyed. He hoped not.
- lol. Remind me of this line from "The Ear, The Eye and The Arm" by Nancy Farmer: "But I miss them!" Hmm, if you don't know the book, this quote may not make any sense lol.
"It is," confirmed Severus. "It will be a horribly busy affair rife with Weasleys, a Slytherin and one Know-it-all. You're welcome to join the maelstrom, should you wish. As I'm told, the more the merrier."