|Reviews for Second Chance: Take Two|
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 16 . 2/28/2011
How does one sit down and back away at the same time?
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 15 . 2/28/2011
Harry pouted out his lower lip, only to have his father push it back into place.
Oh so loved that line! I can totally see that happening. *poke*
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 14 . 2/28/2011
Severus took her proffered hand into both of his, and with a deceptive air of concern he examined the palm of her hand. "Ah! So it seems I did. Do forgive me." He then leaned over and brushed his lips against her sensitive palm.
Then, she smiled wickedly. "But I'm glad I did."
- Okay, perhaps I shall approve of her after all.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 13 . 2/28/2011
This whole time, Harry was inside, by the window, leaning against his grandfather and twisting knots into Dumbledore's beard nervously as he watched as the animal was tended. Every few minutes, Dumbledore waved his hand slightly and a de-knotting spell removed the knots.
Once the owl was relieved of his burden, he flew back onto the chessboard, promptly fell on his side, and went to sleep.
"That owl's not right," murmured Echo.
- That owl ain't right. lol
Severus glanced to his left to see a somewhat portly man in a short, terry cloth robe that swung open and revealed far too much of the man's hairy chest and white belly. He wore a Muggle modern pair of indecent swimming shorts. He thought the man looked ridiculous.
"Echo's not my mum," asserted Harry. "Yet."
OH god. lol
"Severus is quite good, but I must admit, I'd dearly love to see him get thrown in the water." He chuckled and Harry laughed with him.
Had more of a snort this time.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 12 . 2/28/2011
A date perhaps. Oh, you do have me intrigued with your heterosexual Severus.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 11 . 2/28/2011
Yay! I loved it when he insulted Bido!
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 10 . 2/28/2011
I love shiny things!
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 9 . 2/28/2011
Eep scary, but I do so love Daddy Snape with Harry after a nightmare. I may have to reread that chapter (I almost said episode lol)
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 8 . 2/28/2011
"No spanking?" Harry asked, stepping a little closer to his father.
"No spanking. Come here." Harry climbed up onto his father's lap. "Did I frighten you with my yelling?" Harry nodded. Snape felt his hard heart crack painfully. "And did you cry?" Another nod and another crack in his heart. Drawing his child close to his chest, he thought to himself, I am a pitiful, greasy git of a parent.
- Oh I'm glad you cleared that up.
"Let me tell you a secret, Harry, and this is just between us, as men. Women don't know this and we can't ever tell them, all right?"
- Really just snorted.
- I think he should call him "Volleysport." *giggles*
Harry frowned and crossed his arms over his stomach. "You grown ups make things too hard," he muttered.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 7 . 2/28/2011
Heh heh heh. Oh I do love our little Slytherin boy.
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 5 . 2/28/2011
Oh lordy. You know, apparently I never did ask about the birds and the bees. I think I just figured it out on my own (my mother confirms this theory btw).
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 4 . 2/28/2011
What he didn't expect was for her to throw her arms around him and bury her head in his chest. Letting out a sigh of exasperation and glancing towards the sky, he tentatively wrapped his own arms around Echo.
This put Albus, discretely, between Severus and Echo.
*does the Scooby Doo laugh*
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 3 . 2/28/2011
She looked up at Severus and whispered, "Noooo," before passing out.
Noo! Not again! Is what she's probably thinking lol - I'm bad. I just had a flashback to the whale and the potted plant in The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy.
Harry was distressed at her tears and patted her shoulder. "Please don't cry. We're not mean at all," he assured her.
- Poor little Harry.
"Daddy says there's undertoads that will drag you away forever."
"Please don't cry, Echo. You'll make me cry and I don't have anything to cry about," requested Harry.
Severus didn't change his position as the young woman rose angrily from the sofa. She threw the quilt down, and stomped out of the cottage in her bare feet.
- Wait, is she still naked? *goes to reread*
"Well, if daddy is sort of your son, doesn't that kinda make you my grandpa?"
AGH! With the crying!
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
Harry loved the boat ride for about five minutes and then he got seasick and spent the rest of the time in his father's arms hoping the ride would end very soon.
That's . . . kind of how I felt the first time I was ever on a boat, minus the father's arms bit.
While Harry read, mostly smoothly, about the horrible Baba Yaga in her chicken footed hut, Albus carded his slim, wrinkled fingers through the child's hair. Before long, both were snoozing quietly in front of the fireplace.
AWWW - You are intent on making me cry, aren't you!
| lastcrazyhorn chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
"Daddy..." warned Harry from his colouring. He'd recently had a bout with the soapbar for language he'd picked up from Ron Weasley, so now he was keeping an ear out for his father's language.
"Harry James Potter Snape!" shouted Severus as he lunged menacingly towards the inquisitive little boy.
Yay! You changed his name!
How'd you like that ridiculously long review I left on the other story?