Reviews for Incandescence
Shadow Star.EXE chapter 80 . 7/26/2011
Ahaha, that last line killed me. XD

It's like Larxene decided to show Axel a tender moment just to make him shut up.

Nice idea. I wish I had something like that for my prompts. This was cute and hilarious at the same time.
Tonstaaar chapter 80 . 7/25/2011
LOL, fuck buddies xP Nice chapter you should more like it. Your 21 you shouldn't have to worry about taming your stories, If they don't like it then they shouldn't be readingit in the first place, basically don't 'censor' anything your a adult and its your story to be free to write whatever the hell you want!:} Update Soon!xD
Seproth chapter 80 . 7/21/2011
they call them Orgy XIII for a reason amirite?

though all joking aside nice chapter here love.

I wonder what sex was like... a lightning storm or a fire storm?

... curious... YAY update though

I mean how could they want to have sex... it does nothing for them they have no hearts so they get no proper pleasure from it.

Still that is a question you've wrestled with in the past... it makes for an interesting relationship. How do you have a relationship when you feel nothing... you can't call it love since you can't feel that. You can't hate them either... eesh I wonder what its like to have no emotions... but to know what the emotion is. You know what you should be feeling but can't. You want to feel it but you can't... ugh it sounds painful. People like Axel and Saix.

I digress

Loved the chapter. I enjoyed them having semi-serious convo while bare ass naked. It's... cute
MonMonCandie chapter 80 . 7/20/2011
I don't think I have left a review yet. For that I apologize. I'm sorry! XD

Anyways! I want to let you know that I absolutely adore this series! You should get a back on the back and cookies because you totally converted me into an Axel/Larxene shipper when I was honestly neutral on the pairing.

I LOVE how you portray Larxene in your drabbles! She's playful, moody, sadistic, and -le gasp- friendly on occasion! :D I love how you explored so many parts of her personality and kept her character habits (her hand movements and such) present. It really makes me like her more than I have before (I was actually neutral on her too). You make Larxene appear more human (despite the Nobody thing) when in most fics I've seen, everyone always makes her out to be a complete biznotch without anything more to her character. So kudos to you for making Larxene seem so alive! :) Oh, and I like Axel too, it's just the Larxene characterization here really was the shining point for me. xD

Keep up the awesome job! I realize you update here and there, but that's okay! I can always go back and re-read some of these chapters (the Christmas-y one with the mistletoe was my absolute fave). :) Again, fabulous job!
Jillian Bowes chapter 80 . 7/20/2011
Oh you updated! I'm so happy!

LOL this chapter was AWESOME! I love this story, please update soon!

~Blu Bearry
MidnightSchemer13 chapter 10 . 5/17/2011
"No thanks, I'm saving myself for marriage."

Best. Line. Here. xD

Keep writing! Hahaha I LOVE your stories! :)
MyrrhDarkwing chapter 79 . 5/15/2011
Three updates, all at once? Hey, poetry, that's new... I like this one best, I think. The animal metaphor-things are great.

And as always, even as animals they are actually IC.

Hooray for summer vacation!
Le vita e bella chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Haha so epic...hope 100 gets there soon!
One Sky-One Dream-One Destiny chapter 76 . 3/5/2011
Aw a lot of these are so cute When was your birthday? Mine was on Feb 23rd :D
The Bystander who doesn't care chapter 76 . 3/3/2011
Thank you for writing a story involving Axel that is not Yaoi :). Anyways that was really funny.
Shadow Star.EXE chapter 76 . 2/28/2011
Okay, LOL. This was too hilarious.

Alternate names for Luxord, Roxas and Namine? You mean like family names or just last names?
Seproth chapter 76 . 2/24/2011
wait wait wait your younger then me... weird then again I don't even know you I'm some creepy guy who reviews your work and is all like yeah!

*cough* also this is not the first time I've noted you like wizards of waverly place. I like it if only for the reason that the show surprisingly has lots and lots of incest (really... she just needs to shack up with her "brother") I usually don't go for that but...

I'm completly missing the point of why I'm writing this... right what is it... OH YEAH

soooo delightful chapter. You wrote this for a project to which makes it even funnier. I'm just trying to picture your teacher reading this *rubs chin* heheheheh.

... that was a short review I am dissappoint... You know what I will work on my reviewinessisim and I next chapter I will have a postivly EPIC review for you. Till then as always I eagerly await your next chapter
Ashcroft the Second chapter 76 . 2/24/2011
First of all, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Secondly, I would think of secondary names for them, but I need a little more information to go on about them given the context. Also,





That is all.
Jillian Bowes chapter 76 . 2/24/2011
Beaver dammit! (get it?) Man, I thought I was gonna get to be the first one to review your first chapter... Aw well, it was still cute.

Happy birthday! Hooray, alcohol! I'm mostly kidding... mostly...


I kinda saw the MarDem pairing coming. I remember seeing your dA account and there was a picture of them together and I thought, "Hunh. That's an odd pairing..." XD

Okay, enough of my bothersome rambling. Keep up the awesome writing!
MyrrhDarkwing chapter 76 . 2/24/2011
Congratulations on turning twenty-one! Hope you had a good birthday.

Very nice chapter as usual! I love how Larxene rubbed off on Demyx, and the line 'Dude! That's my sister!' was definitely awesome.

I don't mind the AUs. You do them well.

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