Reviews for Loss
SciFiSiren2 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Excellent insights into Vala's feelings about Adria. We can see that Vala is torn because Adria is evil but she loves her in spite of it. I like that you went into how tough it is for Vala to leave her each time, and how she wishes she could give Adria a normal life, good angst there. Well written and well done!
Blurring Fandoms chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Awww. Very sweet.
addicted2fic chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Khentkawes chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Oh, very nice! Sad, but sweet.

The comparison between Adria and Shifu is interesting because even though they are quite different, they also have some similarities.

I like the way you capture Daniel's voice in this. And the conversation between Daniel and Vala is very poignant without becoming overly-emotional (which is hard to do, especially with Vala's voice).

Nicely done. I enjoyed it. :)
Myosotis13 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Good job, and great analogy! Never had thought that Shifu had been to Daniel a sort of precursor to what Adria was to Vala. (well okay a little less emotional conflict there, but still.) Very nice scene between the two of them:).

acer-sigma chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Nice story. And it's rather unfortunate that the issue of children is also something that Daniel and Vala share.