Reviews for Time Flies
InsanityGoneMad chapter 17 . 4/9/2010
Ah Im so glad you decided to write the time series. But come on Eli David - Bad bad bad guy. You could have written something like evil, scheming bastard or something. :P

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 16 . 4/9/2010
Poor Neptune! She didn't deserve to be shot :( And Eli's dead, YES! :DD Wierd how Ziva and Gibbs' postitions were reversed... great ending!

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 15 . 4/9/2010
Gibbs didn't die...yet! YEY! I don't have to kill you now :P I loved:

After around five minutes, Ziva, McGee, Tony, Abby and Ducky burst through the door, and began hounding Isaac, other than Ducky, who began hounding the doctors.

Of course Ducky would start hounding the doctors. :P

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 14 . 4/9/2010
GIBBS! *crys* Hayley if you kill Gibbs I'll... I'll...

Great chapter though.

GIBBS! *crys more*

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 13 . 4/9/2010
LOL! I love Simon, really is it that hard to ask NICELY for your daughter to open her mouth? OK i probaly is but she's 5! Loved the chapter made me laugh the whole way through.

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 12 . 4/9/2010
Well... that went smooth. Good going Isaac. Honestly! And why did Tony have to sneeze couldn't he hold on for like another minute! lol great chapter though.

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 11 . 4/9/2010
LOL. Love the sound of Jenny's room though I don't think I would personally like it, it was just funny. And Tony reading Deep Six? Haha funny.

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 10 . 4/9/2010
Poor Ziva :( She's missed out on so much *crys* And never would have suspected Abby would marry but you know it's your story and you always do the best thing for yours and I like Simon anyway. Loved that Abby's daughter - Kate - rebeled by not becoming a goth.:D

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 9 . 4/9/2010
Ok I just loved:

"All the years of teasing to catch up on," said Tony dreamily. "All the years of movie references and correcting your English . . ."

"All the years of causing you pain," Ziva tagged on.

and:

"Besides, if you brought Lisa back you might have some problems with Tommy's marriage, due to your earlier, um, misunderstanding," Ziva smirked.

McGee blushed. Now he was embarrassed.

"Look, it's not my fault you two have a very odd relationship!"

"It's not our fault that you're a McIdiot!"

Ah those made me laugh so much.

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 8 . 4/9/2010
Somehow I don't think I'd ever drive with Ziva! :P Nick's bad enough (Hay if you don't know who he is by now...) Love this chapter like I do in every other though it didn't make me laugh as much. And no tiva :( *crys* only joking I love reading your stories anyway and I enjoy all ships I just love Tiva more.

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 7 . 4/9/2010
Of course Ziva had to choose the red sports car. I wouldn't be able to resist either. Loved this chapter even if not much happened, it still made me laugh a lot and I'm probaly ruining William's movie. LOL!

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 6 . 4/9/2010
Ha! I love Fab. Let's see my favourite part besides the end would be:

Tony slapped his hand theatrically to his forehead. Gibbs rested his hand on Tony's shoulder.

"There's no way to stop them DiNozzo. Trust me, I had to deal with you."

"Ouch, boss."

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 5 . 4/9/2010
I loved the start. How typically Tony :P Poor Ziva though *crys* SHE'S ALIVE and he has to accept that she's NOT dead. I mean it Hay if you kill Ziva I am going to go over to the UK and kill you myself or at least throttle you. :P

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 4 . 4/9/2010
ah Im so happy that I've come back to reading your stories after what 4months that Id ditched you. Infact Im still ditching you just not over the internet... anyway brilliant chapter as always, but right now I smell bacon and Im going to go eat it then come back and finish reading the time series :P

Keep writing.

Mx
Mysteryreview chapter 16 . 11/17/2009
Hey! Good story! Can't wait to read the sequal!
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