|Reviews for Revival of a Broken Soul|
| Darkest-Mage chapter 10 . 6/6/2009
Good job! You capture Paine's character really well, including the little arguments she has with herself! I can just imagine that happening to her!
| DragonGirl323 chapter 10 . 5/27/2009
This chapter was really good. I loved it! You just have really bad luck with computers don't you? :P Well I hope you can update this story again soon. I can't wait to read more! I wanna know who this strange stalker guy is already... :]
| DragonGirl323 chapter 9 . 5/11/2009
This chapter was very good, especially the lemon. It was very sensual with just a touch of lust. Very nice touch. Bravo! I hope you update again soon! I can't wait to read more! :]
| DragonGirl323 chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
Yay! I'm so happy you updated! This chapter was really good and now I'm a-goin' to read the next one! :]
| DeathGod666 chapter 9 . 5/10/2009
That was really hot.
I can't wait to see the repercussions that both of them are gonna go through.
| DeathGod666 chapter 8 . 5/10/2009
Wow..Baralai actually quit being a Praetor!
I can't wait to see how this turns out.
What's gonna happen to him?
| salanghae chapter 7 . 5/4/2009
this was cute
but the whole war inside her head was really confusing sometimes
but it was really good
keep writing it! :D
| Rukangel chapter 7 . 4/26/2009
m... one word i tell u. W.O.W u know im not a big fan of FF but i know some of the character thou i was lost most of the time but easy to follow. and another word for it AW tha t was a sweet last chapter
ok something that i found confusing was the weird guy thou i know ur not done withthis one can i know who that weird person is and who did she hurt before? and y do i have a felling that weird person is the one she hurt before? ...
3 th is storry reaminds me a lot of u and joel aw..
*run for cover* - but i like it actualy it took me strang into it all. so yea
| DeathGod666 chapter 7 . 4/26/2009
Great new chapter. I liked the strong emotion that is showed in both Paine and Baralai.
| Nigtalea chapter 7 . 4/26/2009
Oh my word...
The ending is so CUTE!
I love this chapter!
| DragonGirl323 chapter 7 . 4/26/2009
Wow, this chapter was intense. Very very intense. I absolutely loved it! You did such a great job capturing their emotions. It felt like I was right there with them in the rain.
I hope you update again soon! I can't wait to read more! :]
| DragonGirl323 chapter 6 . 4/21/2009
Yay, you're back! These were two very good chapters! I can't wait until we find out Paine's secret! And if she tells Baralai about it! :] Update again soon please!
| KathleenDee chapter 6 . 4/19/2009
i like it, i like it :)
| Nigtalea chapter 4 . 4/2/2009
Oh my word, I love this story.
I really like Paines thourghts. They are quite amusing especially in this chapter.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Good work.
P.S. I apologize for my awful spelling.
| salanghae chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
the ending was funny with the dot thingy
but who's the mysterious stranger?
and i hope Paine and Baralai get together soon
can't wait for the next one