Reviews for Paradise Found
Schatze8210 chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
Wonderful story. Very creative and detailed.
mertock chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
hey really great story. My only complaint it that there are no soldiers in the Air Force. Soldiers are what you call people in the Army, Airmen are what you call people in the Air Force, Sailors are in the Navy, and of course Marines are just called Marines
samfan9 chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
My gosh! A powerfully written story! the whumping is graphic enough to be horrific but fortunately you held back on the horror factor. Thank you for writing. Love it.
Zoser chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Action packed!
Alys5 chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Loved this story, It's good to be able to read it all in one go.