|Reviews for The End|
| The Black Rose Of The South chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Now that. Was. Sad.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
That is not what i expected.
| x chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
wow. That was pretty amazing.
| aninynmous chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
The beginning, EW! The ending, NO! NOT RIGHT!
| Team Rosalie chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
so sad. poor edward n bela.
| UnfortunatelyAddicted chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Ah... Poor Edward.
| uh chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
| Winjessin chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
I don't know what kind of a childhood you had ... but I liked it! Keep up the good work!
| startreklover224 chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
This ending was WAY better than the real ending to breaking dawn. I mean seriously i thought this would have been a much better ending. I'm not saying I don't like Bella and Edward, but I would have had her die at the end. Just made more sense to me...
| Stephycats7785 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
You know thaat was a better ending that what happened in breaking dawn. Sorry im not a bella fan but you did good with this story. It was realistic.
| fallingawake18 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
haha this was so funny. you should definitely write more parodies.
| buggie21 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
| Tanique chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
I thought it was great... Just needed to be a bit longer maybe.
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
I thought the idea of an alternate result of Edward and Bella's lovemaking was good, however, I did not find the story to be as interesting as the title and summary promised it would be. The ending wasn't quite appropriate for the dark premise, and there were, well, one or two grammatical errors. Honestly, I think you have the potential and creativity for this, but just a little bit more mystery and darkness would have made this a lot better.
| Kerz chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
OMFG HE KILLED HER...THATS LIKE OMFG XDXDXDXD
SERIOUSLY THAT WOULD BE BREAKING DAWNS PERFECT ENDING XD
*still cant believe he killed her*
Your really good with these comedy story keep up the hard work .