Reviews for Purity
magnusthered1999 chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
update please
Thorn In Your Side chapter 3 . 5/28/2009
What, you mean the story's done?

I think you could've either skipped over the fact that Letha was wearing skimpy clothes, or detailed them.
nickolas kupper chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
I like the plot so far, keep them coming
someonewhoforgotthierpassword chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
Don't see many elf stories. Hope you continue, although if the plot is just sex then it might get slightly boring after a while. You mispelled a few words but not bad all in all.
Thorn In Your Side chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Hey, its the second chapter!

I was looking forward to this in a very obscene way.

Your lemon writing skills are fine. :]
YSRS chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
cool, now what happens?
Thorn In Your Side chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Dude.

I love your dialogue.

*hugs* Caleda and Illiria's speech is formal, but not over-the-toply so, and you show that its not just the only type of dialogue you can do with the-*checks*-prison guard elf. Very nice.

Ah, lemons. Where would we be without them?

(Remember, alternatives to moan~)

Also, one thing-

/"Lady?” asked one of the Swordmasters in her personal retinue, famous for being exclusively female./

I don't get it. Its a joke, right? But...like, the gender, or is she inclined to bedding females, or what...?

And, Warhammer's a game, right? So...Orcs? Aren't those from LotR?