|Reviews for Purity|
| magnusthered1999 chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
| Thorn In Your Side chapter 3 . 5/28/2009
What, you mean the story's done?
I think you could've either skipped over the fact that Letha was wearing skimpy clothes, or detailed them.
| nickolas kupper chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
I like the plot so far, keep them coming
| someonewhoforgotthierpassword chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
Don't see many elf stories. Hope you continue, although if the plot is just sex then it might get slightly boring after a while. You mispelled a few words but not bad all in all.
| Thorn In Your Side chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Hey, its the second chapter!
I was looking forward to this in a very obscene way.
Your lemon writing skills are fine. :]
| YSRS chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
cool, now what happens?
| Thorn In Your Side chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
I love your dialogue.
*hugs* Caleda and Illiria's speech is formal, but not over-the-toply so, and you show that its not just the only type of dialogue you can do with the-*checks*-prison guard elf. Very nice.
Ah, lemons. Where would we be without them?
(Remember, alternatives to moan~)
Also, one thing-
/"Lady?” asked one of the Swordmasters in her personal retinue, famous for being exclusively female./
I don't get it. Its a joke, right? But...like, the gender, or is she inclined to bedding females, or what...?
And, Warhammer's a game, right? So...Orcs? Aren't those from LotR?