Reviews for Better Then Me
eenayde chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
I can feel the grief of this story, but it just doesn't seem realistic. Sorry. I mean, why would Deidara go to Kakuzu even without the money? To get killed? If that's the case, why did he go back to Sasori? And how have Deidara and Itachi met? Why do you keep referring to Sasori as 'you' and then at other times as his real name? There are also some spelling mistakes. I'm sure that us could be much better if you just looked over it and edited it. You're a good writer.
This is true. It's my criticism. I do feel like this story really got to me, it just didn't get to me as much as it should've.
Good job, though.
AkioKuro chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Aww...so sad yet sweet ;-;
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
The title should be "Better than Me"
Lumi yoshinigama chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
i like this story
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Good yet sad
The Quiet Shadow XVII chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
aw! That was so sad!

At the end I was pulling my hair so hard(and that probably left me bald cuz my hair is thin and short xD)
Marmalah chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Oh my god! That was soo sad! But I liked it... this was a really good story. And you randomly came up with it? I wish I could do that... Anyways, awesome! Good job.

~Tayler