|Reviews for Mawkish Melee|
| musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
| Book girl fan chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I think piping hot cookies would be pretty nice right now, so I'll say, Awesome!
| Minty Blue chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
| Athena Silverwolf chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
To: whoever puts downright awful in their review...rethink your word choice. On an entirly new spectrum please. Thank you,
from: Athena Silverwolf, the current host of the spirit of Princess Evelyn of the North
| Epsilon Scorpii chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
The boys reactions were funny. Love how they panicked :-)
| Mychele O'Carrik of Clonmel chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Very good! I like it alot.:) the part where Ed is, dreaming? about the battle is very intersting. In fact, your whole style is interesting, and uses good language. Gotta love a bromance. :D
| marble-fire chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
"Are you MAD?"
This line made me laugh so hard! GAH! I loved this story XD
| The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
cute. i liked it a lot.
| WillowDryad chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Very nice again. :)
| CatchingCraziness chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
As always; this was really good. It was intresting reading the battle scene from Edmunds POV since i read it in Peters POV in 'P.E.' :)
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Brilliantly written. Well done.
P. S. And yes, I'm going through all your stories that I haven't read yet, and reading them.
| PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Aw! That was cute! I wish I had a big brother like that!
| AlwaysABrandNewDay chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
| Jill G. Lowrey chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Very good. I always enjoy reading and reviewing your works. My favorite to read and reread is PE. In terms of this one it was very good and very well written. My only issue was with the mention of claymores in the beginning of Ed's memories of the old battles. I was at a complete loss as to why a mine would be seen in Narnia. Then I looked it up and it is also a sword. That cleared so much up for me. I have often heard the term "Claymore" used in WW2 documentaries and films to refer to the M18 Claymore, part of what caused the confusion.
It was still very, very good.
| Calyn chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Hurrah! It's up! *adds*
*winces* Oh, Edmund. Ouch. I love the realism with the other boys standing around and being scared and confused and clueless. Hurray for a old-timey name (Wallace). Peter's taking command is great.
Pain, confusion, agh-PETER'S HERE. Everything will be good now. Uh oh. Blacking out. Flashback. ASLAN. PETER. Ambulance. Joking.
Last line is awesome.