|Reviews for Mawkish Melee|
| Brdese chapter 1 . 7/14
Thank you so much on pronouncing ennui that annoyed me for the longest time XD
| Kia chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
I loved this,it was really well written.
| dakotah chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Are u christian? That wonderful
I am too. And I loved your fanfic!
| Cyn2K chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
Very mawkish indeed. Aw, poor Ed gets beat up an awful lot.
| IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
Absolutely wonderful! Love it! Could you do something similar, but switch Peter and Ed's places?
| Linguam chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
"Stop being so dratted affectionate!"
Haha, I really like that remark, makes me laugh a little every time. And good job describing the confusion among the boys, that too was pretty amusing
| Cynder2013 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
| musicalgirl4474 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
| Book girl fan chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I think piping hot cookies would be pretty nice right now, so I'll say, Awesome!
| wanderlustcali chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
| Athena Silverwolf chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
To: whoever puts downright awful in their review...rethink your word choice. On an entirly new spectrum please. Thank you,
from: Athena Silverwolf, the current host of the spirit of Princess Evelyn of the North
| Epsilon Scorpii chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
The boys reactions were funny. Love how they panicked :-)
| Mychele O'Carrik of Clonmel chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Very good! I like it alot.:) the part where Ed is, dreaming? about the battle is very intersting. In fact, your whole style is interesting, and uses good language. Gotta love a bromance. :D
| marble-fire chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
"Are you MAD?"
This line made me laugh so hard! GAH! I loved this story XD
| The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
cute. i liked it a lot.