|Reviews for Why Don't You|
| CarolinaH.Manning chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
I like this. while Peter always seeemd less unnerved by his feelings for her, he has as many walls around him as she has. it was interesting to see his side of fearing for her while being afraid of her
| ShiroFlake chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Awesome job !
| Alison M. DOBELL chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I really liked this but where's the rest? This feels like the build up to a really good story so I hope you decide to write more chapters. Would it help to beg? Just an itty bitty bit?
- Ali D :)
| Obsessedfringey chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
I've read this loadss of times and just not got round to reviewing, so I have spare time and I toddled over here to write you one!
I love this story so much! I love that Peter is so hesitant yet he wants to go in there and he wants to see her but it would be like he was admitting something to himself that he isn't ready to.
Liv may not be the starring role, but I love that you didn't have her breaking his eye contact. so cute D
I even loved the Charle input. He's so concerned about LIv, you would expect him to try to help, but you write him so well that I could imagine it was actually him.
Any chance of a sequel/companion fic from Liv's POV?
| dream-of-belief chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
You were ama-za-zing! I loved this!
| Swamp Fairy chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
i thought it was really good. liked it a lot. thought you captured peter great. but i was confused. why was he so afraid to go in and see her? and charlie seemed to think they had fought or something. that confused me, but that aside, i really liked it.
| Miss Mila chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Aw, I liked it.
I could totally see Peter doing all of this. Thinking all of those things. And I don't think I'd blame him, lol.
I think you pinned his character down really well.
Good job, Did you like 'Bounds'?
| Belka chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
It was just damn excellent!:)
| MyGoldenGlow chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
I loved it! It had all of the cuteness of a lovey-dovey hospital scene, with realistic characters and more difficult emotions! I could definately see Peter having trouble admitting how he felt to himself. Great job! I love the hospital scenes too, but this was different, and really good.
| JT4Life chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
oh the angst! wow, that was good! i love what you did with Peter in this one, it was very original but somehow i can see that happening. it'd be awesome if you'd continue it. i mean, it's a great cliffie ending like this, but i'd love to hear the rest of their conversation if you want to write some more!
| Ocein chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I'm so glad you decided to do something different. Yes, Peter is a bad boy. You did a great job! One little spelling mistake, but I loved it!
| ahealthyaddiction chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
That was GREAT. I really enjoyed reading that... you really captured Peter. Please write more!
| wjobsessed chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I really like this alot.
You've captured some of the complicated emotionality that is Peter Bishop.
I also love the dialogue with Charlie. Right on! Charlie knows that angst all too well, and it must've been written all over Peter's face. You could've had Charlie be mean toward him in that moment but you didn't do that. :)
"But maybe he was already in too deep and just didn't realize it. Maybe he was just fooling himself into thinking he could still leave." :)
"You care about her a lot more than originally planned." I love that line. Even crazy Walter knows it.