Reviews for Mayday
Joldino-Sidestreaker chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
I teared up a lot in this story, didn't help that i just finished watching the movie for the 100th time. This was great. what you could have done to make it better though would to put in the other characters feelings and such, like how Sharpe was feeling when their shuttle went down or how the others were. other than that it was really good.
MoonlitSorrows chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
Wow. This story was so powerful. I loved it. It showed great developement in friendship and in love without looking really cheesy and corny. It was life. Real and true. This is what makes such a great writer. Please continue with your work and I will definately read.
Sam Fisher 007 chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
You did a good job with this story, I enjoyed it very much! I like that Rachel fit well into the scenes without feeling shoehorned, and the slight romance between her and Colonel Sharp was wonderful! The ending was powerful, too. Though I think it would've been a nice touch if one of Sharp's kids was part of the astronaut team visiting the asteroid half and retrieving Oscar.

All and all, very well-written. Armageddon is one of my favorite movies!
Aylveirn chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Relatively well written, and some grammatical errors, but I like the idea. I did notice your transitions through the parts of the movie were not entirely visible unless you've near memorized the movie. (I've only read Chapter 1 so far.)
Suzy87 chapter 4 . 3/18/2010
You just made me very sad! I was hoping for a happy ending and You killed my favorite character! It's a great AU OC story! And you did a great job! Congratulations! Is it possible for you to write a AU End please!PLEASE! That would make me very happy! Bye ;)
swimmer07 chapter 5 . 8/9/2009
That was an amazing story. I loved how you fit her in so well but didn't mess with the story line either. Amazing!
whatevs chapter 4 . 3/5/2009
okay there is only one problem i have with this whole story. well two actually. iyts not really an original story if most of the dialouge is lines from the movie. second if you are going to create a fictional character that adds one more crew to the independence then you either need to get rid of one of the team memebrs that was on independece in the movie or add another fake character on freedom. why would one shuttle team have one more man than the other? Also each memebr was given a specific role in the mission. on freedom harry ran the crew, chick ran the transmission max used the armadillo, and rockhoud was the geologist. on the independence aj was the crews leader and was also the armadillo guy(which begs the question what was noonans job, maybe to help bear with the tranny), bear ran the transmision, oscar was the geologist. What would adding one more crew member due?
angelfiredra chapter 5 . 3/1/2009
thats the first time in a while ive cried because of a fanfic ... i THINK i like the ending im not sure yet lol but the whole thing was amazing
Darthbane2007 chapter 5 . 2/12/2009
Nice ending chapter, but whatever happened to the rest of the crew such as:

AJ

Grace

Bear

Rockhound

Chick

Lev

Watts

and anybody I missed?
bunny94 chapter 5 . 2/10/2009
well i should hope your not dead otherwise i would be a little bit scared. like i read dead peoplel's stories stuff going on...that would be creepy. i really liked the ending, but if you ever get a chance to answer i have a question: harry frost is a.j. and grace's son right? cause i was a little confused for a minute. hope another story comes soon.

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bunny94 chapter 4 . 1/29/2009
omg! this ending was so sad! why did she have to die! it was still an awesome story though. i really liked it. its also really sad, yet awesome, how you made racheal after someone you know. was she a realative? and did she actually die as an astronaut, or jus normal causes? hope a new story is up soon!

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bunny94 chapter 3 . 1/25/2009
yeah well texas heat probably dosn't make 3 illnesses go around your grade. ugh. being sick sucks. this chapter was so sad. i love oscar how the heck is rachael gunna find everyone? i mean she has to go over the grand canyon on the rock. update asap please!

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Darthbane2007 chapter 3 . 1/24/2009
Great story, and I can't wait to read the ending, but:

1. So, if AJ, Bear and Lev already left in the Armadillo to find the other shuttle, how is Rachel going to get back? Unless the Armadillo didn't go far, she can't very well walk there, as the shuttle is over 30 Miles away...
bunny94 chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
cold wheather sucks! sorry had to put that in. oo la la. we got some kissing going on :) i wonder what sharp will do when her plane crashes...

update asap please!

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bunny94 chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
seriously dude. you come up with the best stories. if you never publish a book during your lifetime that would suck becuase you are a really good writer! i love the story! updae asap please!

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