|Reviews for I Left My Heart With You|
| jk chapter 2 . 7/1/2016
the way they introduced themselves made me fucking cringe! I am 21 years of age...I am also a robot
| RandomPerson chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
You are a promising writer, but first if all, if you're writing in the Twilight Universe, VAMPIRES CANNOT BECOME INEBRIATED. There is no way this could have ever happened because Edward would have had to be a human to get drunk, and him knowing Alice is far in the future at that point. Also, Rose was jealous of him liking Bella and not her, so she wouldn't have challenged Edward to go meet someone. Also, VAMPIRES can't blush and he would have already "heard" Jasper saying not to bet against Alice, furthermore he would have seen Alice's intentions in her thoughts. Is this in a universe where they are human?
| Dazzle Me Again chapter 11 . 7/25/2009
That was really sweet. I liked it. :)
Have a wonderful day!
| JamiesEdward chapter 11 . 5/21/2009
Is there going to be MORE? xoxo Jamie
| Julie2781 chapter 11 . 4/26/2009
Can't wait to read more ! Love it !
| fabm21 chapter 11 . 4/16/2009
cool way to show significance of thoughts! the song u put, related well to. nice chapter! can't wait for more. update soon pls...
| Ashlyn13 chapter 11 . 4/16/2009
The dream totally made me was so sweet and sad at the same time.I loved it!Edward's revelation was a total eye was the runner up title?Update Soon! :D
| Kel to the Sey chapter 11 . 4/16/2009
Wow. That part with his mom made me tear up. Good job on the chapter.
| SakuraPetals14 chapter 11 . 4/16/2009
another awesome chapter please update soon!
| twilightslife chapter 10 . 4/14/2009
great chapter keep up the great work!
| AmenahBox2 chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Well done .That was interesting!
| fabm21 chapter 10 . 4/10/2009
nice chapter! so they meet in a bar huh...rite now i have absolutely no idea where the story is going but the first 10 chapters were written well...a little short, but nice. keep writin!
| Kel to the Sey chapter 10 . 4/10/2009
Aww. This was a cute chapter. A good surprise for someone who can't sleep near 1 in the morning!
| Ashlyn13 chapter 10 . 4/10/2009
That whole ideals thing and future dreams was just so...so...cute!I can totally picture Bella and Edward having this conversation in the actual Twilight 's just so the end was funny!I laughed...loudly...and everyone in the house is sleeping...whoops...oh well.I'm so happy that you updated!Update Soon! :D
| Death By Insanity chapter 10 . 4/10/2009
seeing my puppypower149 username is odd. now im used to screaming bubbles. the chapters are still really good and getting better i think