Reviews for Unintended
Agonidzo777 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
bella chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
One word:perfect!Thank you.
Bobo chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
That was so sweet I loved it
Sarahippy chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
AMAZING. This perfectly captures them - the fun, the tension, the intensity, the romance and most of all, the pure, untainted love. You are amazing. Xoxo
Dominika chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
YES!Love it!Makes me envy Bella so much more than what I do up write this from Bella's POV!PLEEEEASE!It's KILLING me!
LoverOfLoveStories chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
This was so beautifully tender and romantic! Wonderful job and thank you so much for sharing this jewel!
Lisa chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
it was fantastic! I hope you can write somethign new thanks !
Bonnie-Rose chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
you were very very good at describing it very very descriptive

sarah taylor chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Your stories have been amazing! I look forward to reading anything else that comes from your great mind!
EdwardBella35 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Oh my goodness! How do u DO that? These stories are unbelievable! You just... Capture them so beautifully. You really respect Edward and Bella and I really admire that. You are a very well-minded person, I can tell. Omg... I have to say it: you are ON Stephenie's level here. This is AMAZING. And thank you so much for respecting them together like this. You didn't make it gross, or vulgar. You really respected and took great care in writing about this aspect of their relationship. It's very elegant and portrayed in the right way. Every sentence is SO thought out! Just thank you... for knowing these characters and portrayi g them in the correct way and respecting them. It's just such a relief to know that people really do love Edward and Bella as my much as I do, what with a lot of comments around fansites that are all trying to base the story on Edward and Jacob's bodies and who's hotter than who. Ya know what I mean? THIS, THEM, how much they love each other, that's what it's based I really wouldn't be surprised if you became a famous writer :).
Mrs.Cullen chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
that was so amazing it made me blush and at times hold my breathe you are a very talented writer
Jadiona chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
You're a good writer, I like your one-shots
fan chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I love the way you write! so mature, I would never guess a 17 year old could be so descriptive. well done and keep it up!
jlmckinney1982 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Yet, another fantastic story. Love it!
Wendi 'Triplet Mom' Sotis chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I see you haven't written in a while... just know I would love to read more!
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