Reviews for Veiled Child
JBubbles chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Just one word after that:


I would love to read a sequel, 'tough, replaying the shift of the happy to the tearing family. I originaly thought that something bad happened when I read Syuusuke looking to his shoes, but alas, good job.
Wisteria-Child chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Poor Yuuta.

I really pity him.

It always has to be about Syusuke. Not that I hate him though.

"Syuusuke this, Syuusuke that.

. . . Yuuta, who? " - this one was quite heartbreaking.

I've felt this way before because of my cousin... It hurts since she's the closest to me.

I really love your fic and appreciate it. Because now, I'm aware that I have to support my younger brother, there is no doubt that he'll be compared with me once he starts in grade school. He is actually being compared to me already.

Love your fic. :)
pages.of.altaire chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
it was so sad. Yuuta never gets the spotlight, his brother always steals it all (unintentionally of course). *sigh*...I feel really bad for Yuuta sometimes.

Great job on the story though... :)

Khelc-sul Renai chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Poor Yuuta. This makes me want to cry for him...

Well written.
blueberry chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Poor Yuuta,I love it,so sad,but interesting._
rebekahalana chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Oh how sad ...

It does explain his need to continually fight to be recognised and was very well written . Thank you for sharing !
yukisana chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Wow... I never thought I would like any Yuuta fics... but this one almost made me wanna cry. Poor him!

It's very understandable why he chose to go to St. Rudolph instead of Seigaku. It's UNBEARABLE!

Good job. The last part was just touching...

"Syuusuke this, Syuusuke that.

... Yuuta, who?"