Reviews for Story 2: Is All Fair in Love and War?
Albapedro chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
I'm really enjoying this story. You have a good handle on the characters. Although I reckon Tony shoudl've totally laid the guy Marcus out. You should work that in to another story or something!
superficialcynic chapter 5 . 1/26/2009
Aw. So close for Tony and Ziva.
ejn10175 chapter 5 . 1/25/2009
i cant believe marcus believes that he still has a chance with ziva
samleigh chapter 5 . 1/25/2009
As I like them together. I still think that even when they get close there will be a backlash with one of them. They are both too guarded.
BellaWriterChic chapter 4 . 1/24/2009
This is great. Marcus is a jerk. I really like this sequel!
M E Wofford chapter 4 . 1/24/2009
Do not be evil, please.

Let them be happy.


superficialcynic chapter 4 . 1/24/2009
Are they actually going to get together? Nice touch on the heel snapping.
samleigh chapter 4 . 1/23/2009
I am so glad she didn't sleep with Marcus.

I can't wait for the next chapter
ejn10175 chapter 3 . 1/23/2009
o no a twist. that is never good. please update soon
M E Wofford chapter 3 . 1/23/2009
Good chapter.

Are Tony and Ziva finally talking truth to each other?
superficialcynic chapter 3 . 1/23/2009
Poor Tony. Update soon.
samleigh chapter 3 . 1/22/2009
No Marcus is an ass. I hope they did not actually sleep together.

I am looking foward to what happens next.
krazybanana chapter 3 . 1/22/2009
A twist? There is already several twists...

but they r good

sounds exactly like tony
M E Wofford chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
Thank you for the punch.

It should only have put out his lights.

Good chapter.

Good interaction with Tony and Ziva.

I hope she wakes up soon.
ejn10175 chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
I didnt think it was possible to hate marcus anymore but this chapter proved me wrong. I cant wait to see wht abbys reaction is to tony getting punched and zivas after seeing marcus,please update soon
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