Reviews for Into the Fire
TheMaoh chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
That was beautiful... Your writing style is wonderful in how there is a large ratio of description to dialogue, and with great flow, unlike many authors who have too much dialogue with not enough description. The atmosphere you're able to generate in your stories truly draws the reader into your story world. Most of all, the emotions in your story are palpable; you can just FEEL what the characters are feeling.
Sawyer Fan chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
So very very sweet. Loved it!
Lzay-Niight chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Again, one word: AAAWWW! I wish it was that simple...
Starkiller chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Beautiful Absolutely perfect. I really do love your writing style. )
AsuraChan chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Very sweet.

No unreal declarations of love.

I could feel the warmth and emotions in the room.

very well done.
Syriel chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
What a sweet ending...

Very thoughtful and not rushed at all

Very realistic and hopeful

and beautifully written

You know what? I think that you are a great writer

Syriel
melodyz07 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
That was so sweet

I really wonder what is happening in Yuuri's mind in this oneshot. He seems kind of mysterious...
Kitsune Demon Girl chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
Cute :3
Toxxxic chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
This was really sweet and warming. I REALLY enjoyed it.
mySoulmyLovemyLife chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
This fanfic is wonderful,very poignant. Please continue or at least write a sequel

kudesai,
Rayonea chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
It's so nice to see a calmly romantic fic like this one. It was a delightful read.
Daikaio chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I enjoy the simplicity behind this one-shot. It's lovely to read! I very much enjoyed this!
Icaros Rising chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Sweet! I like the fact that it's not overboard. :)

And 'was' is right in 'Perhaps the set of his shoulders was...', because it is agreeing with 'the set' not 'shoulders', and perhaps does not follow the same rule as 'if ...were...'
Xedra chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
That is so sweet. Very well done!
sailor ninfea chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
That was a really sweet story. I loved it! I just noticed one slight grammatical error. In "perhaps the set of his shoulders was different" the was should be were.
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