Reviews for If Not for You
rubell chapter 11 . 9/20/2011
YAY! real ILYs! and happy sexy time too? cant get better than that...
rubell chapter 10 . 9/20/2011
awwww...
rubell chapter 9 . 9/20/2011
i am trying to be happy and positive but it is freaking me out
rubell chapter 8 . 9/20/2011
sad again...their first ILY, or at least his is a drunken ILY...she deserves better...
rubell chapter 7 . 9/20/2011
first of all, i kinda cant stand renee...second...i hate sad sex...
rubell chapter 6 . 9/20/2011
awww...i want them to get married for new years!
rubell chapter 5 . 9/20/2011
i am happy but extremely worried...i dont wamt either of them to end up with broken hearts!
rubell chapter 4 . 9/20/2011
omg! he admitted his crush...but what he did for her with lauren and jessica? priceless...but when renee finds out, it is gonna cause a riot!
rubell chapter 3 . 9/20/2011
i think i love your edward!
rubell chapter 2 . 9/20/2011
ok, now i have another question, should have been in chpt 1 but what the hell is wrong with bellas parents that they didnt want her to go to dartmouth, they would rather her be some two-bit everyday joe's barefoot pregnant wife instead of having a fulfilling career?
rubell chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
so far i love it! only one question, if his father is a dr why would he need to pay for his own schooling?
Obsessive Behaviors chapter 17 . 8/29/2011
Well, I vested my soul. I really like this story. It has all the elements of a good story, a hot Edward, steamy sex scenes, a caring Bella and a wonderful family. The premise was original with a twist of The Wedding Date intermingled in the plot. Suave Edward turns to mush in love. Kind of like him that way. Bella learns to rely upon others and realized what it feels like to be in love. Good stuff.

The Tavern On The Green is no more. It was nice to read about a once great eatery in NYC. When do you plan to finish the story?
Obsessive Behaviors chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I'm just beginning the story - but I have to know (before I invest my soul), do you have plans to complete the story? I see you have not updated since 2-23-10.

What a great beginning...love to see a HEA at the end.
EllaHelsinki chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
love your story
jenejes chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
I don't know if you have any intentions of finishing this story, but I read it over on Twilighted when you first started it. I would love to see how you envision these two ending up. If you're done, thank you for sharing this fun story with us!
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