Reviews for My Twilight
Majorvampluvr chapter 4 . 2/22/2012
I just have one question. Who exactly hit Bella because when your describing her in the hospital, she talks to Leo, then Tyler is rolled in, and then at the end you say Mike. Just wondering!
xwerewolfluverx chapter 4 . 1/3/2010
his names not leo
LeftwardBard97 chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
this is really good so far keep it up! ~xXKatieCullenXx a.k.a XxKatieMarieCullenxX~
Evolutions Vampire chapter 11 . 5/11/2009
love it
Katy chapter 4 . 3/14/2009
okay good chapter though its starts off as leo and then change to tyler and then mike has to saty at the hospital longer? im kerfuffled
cheerexpress chapter 13 . 2/21/2009
yes werewolves! AND YES JACOB! im all team jacob and he needs to be there!
tanya chapter 4 . 2/20/2009
hey! im really liking your story so far. i love the idea of bella already knowing vampires and the supernatural. one thing tho.i got confused in this you called the perso leo then tyler then mike. :P but thats k i think i follow. anyways great storyline. i was wondering if you were planing on doing everything in the actual twiligt, like from begining to end? anyways..KEEP WRITING!:P
SceneChic123 chapter 14 . 2/19/2009
Caitlin chapter 13 . 2/19/2009
I don't want the wherewolves or Jacob. I personally don't like them but if you put them in I'll understand.
ButtonsluvsEmmett chapter 13 . 2/15/2009
I really enjoyed this i like how you kept close to the orignal story but yet made it so different I'm looking forward to the sequel
imani chapter 13 . 2/12/2009
i like this story but i think the warewolves will mess it up. and the idea to add another guy in love with bella is a good one chapter 13 . 2/6/2009
I love this story!

I personally don't really want the werewolves in the next one, cuz i'm getting sick of stories with them ruining everything being in it.

I also agree with no jacob.

Can't wait to read the next one!
Stephy chapter 13 . 2/4/2009
Hey, I just finished your story and I loved it. This last chapter was killer, Bella losing her best friend/ step-brother was so sad but I am so excited about the sequal, I hope they come back. Well, since you asked about what to do. I think the idea about a new guy going crazy over Bella is brilliant, I love a jealous Edward, but are you gonna make him supernatural or not? About Jacob, I love when Jacob is a friend to Bella in the stories but I hate when he's all broken hearted over her. If he just saw her as a friend, that would be sweet and maybe had a girlfriend/ imprint, that'd be cool. Well, I dont know what to say about the werewolves but since they're in this one and Jacob mentioned the treaty there should be something about them in the next one. Well, good luck with the sequal, I hope other peoples reviews help you out and I know since this one was so good the next one with be pretty sweet as well.
ohlivtree chapter 13 . 2/3/2009
we all know bella is going to be a vampire, so will she meet up with them again
TwilightFanpires chapter 13 . 2/3/2009
Hey guys, forgot to say that I ain't starting on the sequal straight away but it is going to happen, but I'm still having trouble with deciding to keep Jacob or replace him with another Sexy stranger who just moved to Forks. LoL you choose if I don't get any help I'll do it my way, but your the ones reading it so your opinion helps too x
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