|Reviews for Goodbye|
| Heartwould chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
That was good.
All the way down to the end, though, once I had noticed the pattern - I thought the final good-bye would be to Susan, and that it would not be a good-bye forever, for waiting, or the other ones.
| Victoria Alatamir Wan chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Wow...just...wow! Excellent story! [Even though it made me cry...:(]
| Russet022 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Ooh. That was deeper than I thought, and it seems fitting, because I always thought that Edmund learned the most. This is arguable, I understand, but that's just how I read them.
Finally-you wrote a fic that didn't make me cry!
| SpangleyPony chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Nice exploratoion of Eds character. I can imagine how his experiences would make him afraid of the word :)
| KCS chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
I loved this, and I entirely agree with your author's note. This was a moving, very realistic ficlet and you did a wonderful job with it!