|Reviews for Why Dance When You Can Slay The Dragon?|
| AlexiCyn chapter 3 . 10/4
I'm enjoying this story so far. And though I haven't read your reviews, your AN makes me wonder about some folks. Like why they act as if little humans don't think about sex EVER until they turn legal age? Honestly. Do they forget what it was like being whatever age they were when they first thought about it? I for one was far too young to do it, but since I read everything I could get my hands on, I certainly knew about it. LOL
And being naked together doesn't mean something has to happen. And nothing did. So stop it. LOL
| Hercules8 chapter 1 . 10/1
I really like this story. It's cute and romantic! :)
| Ariadne Venegas chapter 20 . 9/9
I really like it!
Robots and all, even if maybe it couldbe metal golem? But I love robots so its OK.
The only thing is that is 1996 at the end no? because they had an entire term, and howarts was closed so 1995 students were abroad in general, so they are coming for 6th year.
| uzumaki misaki chapter 20 . 9/6
Awesome! I loved it! I just read the whole thing in under 24 hrs!
| Alph4wolf chapter 20 . 8/29
Crazy awesome story! It made Hogwarts seem 'updated' with even a bit of Artemis Fowl (1st thing after the trip to U.S. along with big battle). This was a great story, I just recently read it as in started yesterday (from review). Also, thankyou so very much for actually completing this story, too many fanfic authors are ditching their fantastic stories. Once again, thankyou for this AU aventure. :)
| PaC chapter 16 . 8/11
Trouble with the F-16 gag, is it's like fighting with a lance in a tight hallway. Even if that many giants could fit in Diagon and Knockturn without bumping and knocking each other down, falling on buildings and whatnot.
FIRST you have RESPONSE time, other than portkey scrambling jets, you are X kilometers from an airbase, divided by speed plus scramble and take off time.
You MIGHT try harriers or some other VTOL aircraft, OR better, attack helicopters.
You're writing F-16 like they are flies swarming around King Kong. You don't make a pass, flying at such speeds in that kind of jet, and turn on a dime and make another pass. IT will TAKE a LONG time to TURN around.
But then you're unpaid, and just about as dumb unrealistic shit happens in movies ... who have millions to be UNREALISTIC and ...
STory was sort of OK, but not captivating enough, plus seems abandoned anyway. So I'm ejecting out of the jet now.
| Psp reader chapter 20 . 8/5
Nice ending... you will be missed!
| Psp reader chapter 12 . 8/5
Cliffies... what happened to the wards again?
| juan chapter 20 . 8/2
good thing in my story no death eaters will live to see another day all of them will died in the veil after their trial no way no one will eveer break out them
| juan chapter 16 . 8/2
good thing in my story askaban will set up unbreakable wards and to make sure it works stone goblins will guard any coward trying to escape that means tom won't has his dogs back ever
| juan chapter 13 . 8/2
coward running away like his sex toy tom
| juan chapter 11 . 8/2
harry in my sstory will have an army of millions and to make sure the ministerry have the right person james father will be in charge and to make sure dumbledore or doesn't do anything like killed he be made immortal like the whole potter family along with long bottoms and their mate the army will be made of super heroes, allies from the US, spain, france, canada and many other countries the two dark lords will fall before 1981 the real one and the fake weak one
| juan chapter 10 . 8/2
good thing in my story the pootters will take down tom, his girl dogs even his favorite lucius and take down sanep the rat will die before he even tell his whore where the potters are better yet the potters will kill him when they learn the truth where he been
| BritishHPLover chapter 6 . 6/17
Hi, really good so far, however just a couple of things which are niggling at me.
1) In the UK our letterbox/post boxes are red not blue and we call stop lights traffic lights.
2) As this is taking part in GOF why wouldn't they contact Sirius or Remus for help?
3) Harry seems to be very confident about his relationship with hermione and makes innuendo. This seems very Ooc as my professional experience with people who are emotionally abused highlights that harry would be more hesitant at the beginning of a romantic relationship. This would be reinforced by the betrayal of the people he sees as a mother figure and a grandfather figure when he was dosed with amortia.
| Goose chapter 4 . 6/16
You had a good story, with a non-caricature Ron, a Dumbledore who while manipulative, isn't some wolf in sheep's clothing like 95% of the morons who read fanfiction seem to think he is...and then a cheap, Deus ex Machina-esque, Dante ripoff just shows up from out of nowhere. It seems the only reason Harry was kidnapped was to facilitate this unoriginal OP character showing up and looking like a badass. Not only does he know stuff no one else does, but he has powers no one else does, and just fights Voldemort to a stalemate. I was skeptical when I read "OC of mine will show up..." in the AN, but I decided to roll the dice. Lo and behold, you ruin your own story for what smells like a self insert. Oh well, the first three chapters were great...