|Reviews for Falling Rapture|
| since1918 chapter 5 . 6/13/2010
aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i love edward, and i love epov. and i love him. did i already said that? i'm guessing that you are wondering why you are receiving a review if you haven't udpated recently, yeah i'm stalker like that, but i just discovered this story today and completely fell in love with it. and i LOVE french! it's my favorite language yayy me and it seems like you have aquired a lot of new things in the last three months or more i think... congratulations! in the last three months i aquired mmm a book and a lot of food and that's it! well several new friends and crushes btw but nothing important and i don't know why i'm telling my life to a stranger but yeah whatever. till next chapter le jen.
| leonaluvstwilight chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
thats so awsome.. love it cant wait for more...
| leonaluvstwilight chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
awsome totally rockin.. i love the start of this story...
| mountainlioness13 chapter 3 . 12/8/2009
I gotta tell ya, I have NEVER actually been brought to tear by a fic before this one. I've come close, but damn it, you made me cry. gah! Good story! Please keep writing. ;-) Thanks!
| Iceblondie chapter 4 . 11/21/2009
Edwards analogy reminds me o the true Heart a4 chamber organ with 2 ventricals and 2 atriums (sorry if spelt incorrectly) one can not work with out the other and to survive we need all to work and co exist with one another. Bella is his yin and he is her yang. I love the true and devoted love they have for one another.
You've made me smile, laugh as well as cry reading this story and that I like, it brings true human nature into it and reality.
Emmett is one nice assed man, hard on the outside but a softy on the inside(and hot to boot ;-) ) I love how he jokes and with no fear what anyone thinks, not meaning mean just an overly honest and funny person, one that you can prank and be pranked back. Great guy, great friend and great husband to Ro.
Im glad Edward is ready to go through the pictures and relive the past years and bring them to her and make her wake up with the stories and not forget. Very sad that she is in a coma.
| Iceblondie chapter 5 . 11/21/2009
I so love this story, sad but the love story from the beginning is beautiful.
| Iceblondie chapter 2 . 11/21/2009
Wow to think of the endless guilt that Edward feels at this moment is unbearable and eveb though he needs t0 care for his son Everett I still think ge should spend dinner with him then have Emmett an Rosalie keep him over night while Edward goes back to the hospital to be with his wife and talk to her abd convey his sorrow and tell her he is sorry. This will help with his guilt. I feel so bad for them both. Nothing worse than having an arguement then something happen to that loved one.
| Iceblondie chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
I liked the twist with them already married and with a kid
| radioactive77 chapter 5 . 10/11/2009
| tnuccio chapter 5 . 8/26/2009
aw, Le Jen...such a wonderful welcome back...we all love EAMC...he's a darlin'.
Thanks for getting back to this... I missed it.
| SweetDulcinea chapter 5 . 8/25/2009
Guh, I love you.
I think that the best part of this was that you gave it a man's voice. We know that 99.9% of fics are written by women, so when chicks write from a male perspective, it sounds like a girl writing from a male perspective.
You? Nah...You nailed it ) It wasn't forced or awkward. He was just a dude, thinking things that dudes think about women and life. It makes me love him a little more, and love you a little harder. Muah
The memories were very sweet. They flowed together well, and it was so fun to think about Edward, fresh attitude in tow, remembering how he and Bella met and reliving each memory for her. He's able to see past all the shitty little details of life that caused their spat, past his guilt, past the tragedy that could tear him down, and just BE in the good stuff. He needs it, she needs it.
Your little details about supporting characters make me wonder and get excited about how/if they will play into the future plot. The whole Mrs. Robinson relationship with Sue kind of squicked me, but also made me laugh. And his thoughts about City of Angels were hilarious and such a dude thing. LOVED that.
You are amazing and I adore you fureva. I know the fluffiness was hard for you to pull off, but you did it to perfection. Make moar happen!
A billion kisses to you for the awesomesauce. 3
| yankeerose chapter 5 . 8/22/2009
Aw...he's such a romantic.
| sunfire04 chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
That was a great chapter. I was so glad to see an update of this story.
| Everintruiged chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
i'm mucho confuzzled, honey.
i think i've forgotten the plot - so recap? and then, all of these memories threw me off...
| reesessweetie chapter 5 . 8/20/2009
this chapter is so sweet! i love the way they met, both the first and second time. cute!