Reviews for Heartbeat
ForeverRobsessed chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Nice! I liked it...
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Very sweet.
it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Very sweet
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
nice, sweet, touching moment.
ilovedobermans chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
This was a very sweet look at Edward's real first time with his daughter. I am glad it doesn't have any swearing (Noble Korhedron's wish) because I personally dislike that. WAY too OCC! But the bonding, love it!
SerenShadow chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
More Please? I am sad to see it end, it seems like it could go further...

LOVELY! Especially there at the end with Ness and Bella's hearts beating together... just lovely!

Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Hm, cute, but very poorly expanded. How about a series of O/S scenes? From different POV's, even? Possibly even of the same events? Also, if you're old enough to upgrade it to "T"-rated, they might work better - 'cause you could have more arguments, swearing and junk! :-) B-.
MaiMama chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Cash.inMyBootsJR chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
i love it! its so sweet, and exactly how Edward would be. X
fanoftwilight chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I was adorable)
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
This is a beautiful tender moment with Edward and Renesmee. I love how you bring the two of them together. The bonding of parent and child. Beautiful.
vina03 chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Renesmee! so cute!

love it!
hippogriff-tamer chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I enjoyed this look at Edward and his don't see moments like these in BD really...thanks for sharing!
FallingStar95 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Aw. So cute! Love it! Please write more Edward/Renesmee fanfics! :)
MrsEdwardCullenP chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
That was awesome...And you could easily continue this story up to the point where bella is about to wake up as a new born
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