Reviews for Tiny Heart
Guest chapter 25 . 8/25
well a decent story but no way would they have got together that fast and things happen the way they did so that what made the story so so could of been better
Guest chapter 6 . 7/11
How weird...HUMAN alice...just knows things...ya ooook...that town is full of "short sighted" men? what a weird comment...Edward wont let the woman HE LOVES...THE WOMAN HE FUCKING MARRIED...THE WOMAN HE WANTS TO HAVE A CHILD WITH IN HIS CAR? Yaaaaaaaaaaaaa OOOOOOOOKAY
Fortheloveoftwilight chapter 22 . 6/5
Oh my she is so stupid she can't even walk straight. Geez this story is too much. Bella is obviously to stupid to be alive. Edward is pathetic. Soo sad. Thus plot was actually a good one but it got butchered with a meatcleaver.
Fortheloveoftwilight chapter 6 . 6/5
She had no phone to call someone to pick her up? And who wanders alone in alleys and whatnot while pregnant? And knowing Tanya is cruel you want to have a baby with her? And act like it's something endearing? Wow this story is kinda weird
Fortheloveoftwilight chapter 5 . 6/5
Ehhh 5 weeks pregnancy with a semi large stomach? Bulging stomach? At 5 weeks there is nothing even there. What kinda pregnancy is this?
Loveforwolves143 chapter 25 . 5/10
You did good. Some parts were confusing but you had a lot of good emotions going in there to keep me hooked. I always wanted to know what happened next.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/31/2016
Never heard of Chowder but it sounds Boring
Guest chapter 6 . 1/31/2016
How is Bella showing at 5 weeks that impossible did you do any research or did you just wing it and hope for the best because this story is not very good
jk chapter 20 . 10/26/2015
how did SHE break HIS heart? cause she left right after he cheated on her ...with his wife
he not with Tanya hes with bella so he has to fucking business kissing Tanya in the kitchen...hes a cheater he cheated on Tanya and now hes cheated on bella...
Edward can go to hell
jk chapter 13 . 10/26/2015
I'm sorry I must have read that wrong...did Edward say that he called out tanyas name on purpose and now their kissing?

that makes no fucking sense to me...and what was that crap about I believed you and it made you have false feelings for me...what the fuck does that even mean? are you retarded writer? sure seems like it
jk chapter 4 . 10/26/2015
so hes known bella for years and now he thinks about her? why after all this time? I mean hes with Tanya! and has been since high school!
poor bella how very pathetic she is...how does it know that for years he was all over Tanya and never thought twice about you bella? bet that shit hurts
Twihardkristen-once chapter 9 . 7/22/2015
That's just cruel
Guest chapter 9 . 5/9/2015
What the hell was that? he just cum n shouts tanyas name for real? asshole
CallMeJazz chapter 3 . 5/9/2015
For someone who is desperately needs bellas help tanya surely seems like a cold ignorant person. she doesn't even say thank you or show how appreciate she is when bella agree to have their baby. what an ungrateful b!tch
Diamond Dia chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
This story is very confusing. Tanya is dumb but she's a doctor. Is bella pregnant with her own egg or tanya. Bella was a virgin at the implantation but sudden before she sex with edward she sys she had sex in the past. Tanya abandon her in the city with no way back home. Im done.
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