Reviews for Tiny Heart
Loveforwolves143 chapter 25 . 5/10
You did good. Some parts were confusing but you had a lot of good emotions going in there to keep me hooked. I always wanted to know what happened next.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/31/2016
Never heard of Chowder but it sounds Boring
Guest chapter 6 . 1/31/2016
How is Bella showing at 5 weeks that impossible did you do any research or did you just wing it and hope for the best because this story is not very good
jk chapter 20 . 10/26/2015
how did SHE break HIS heart? cause she left right after he cheated on her ...with his wife
he not with Tanya hes with bella so he has to fucking business kissing Tanya in the kitchen...hes a cheater he cheated on Tanya and now hes cheated on bella...
Edward can go to hell
jk chapter 13 . 10/26/2015
I'm sorry I must have read that wrong...did Edward say that he called out tanyas name on purpose and now their kissing?

that makes no fucking sense to me...and what was that crap about I believed you and it made you have false feelings for me...what the fuck does that even mean? are you retarded writer? sure seems like it
jk chapter 4 . 10/26/2015
so hes known bella for years and now he thinks about her? why after all this time? I mean hes with Tanya! and has been since high school!
poor bella how very pathetic she does it know that for years he was all over Tanya and never thought twice about you bella? bet that shit hurts
Twihardkristen-once chapter 9 . 7/22/2015
That's just cruel
Guest chapter 9 . 5/9/2015
What the hell was that? he just cum n shouts tanyas name for real? asshole
CallMeJazz chapter 3 . 5/9/2015
For someone who is desperately needs bellas help tanya surely seems like a cold ignorant person. she doesn't even say thank you or show how appreciate she is when bella agree to have their baby. what an ungrateful b!tch
Diamond Dia chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
This story is very confusing. Tanya is dumb but she's a doctor. Is bella pregnant with her own egg or tanya. Bella was a virgin at the implantation but sudden before she sex with edward she sys she had sex in the past. Tanya abandon her in the city with no way back home. Im done.
jk chapter 22 . 6/19/2014
that's embarrassing as fuck! she hit her head repeatedly hahahahah god shes a fucktard cant even walk up steps god just kill her already shes so fucking worthless
jk chapter 20 . 6/19/2014
funny she could see that from her truck...why is edweird crying? he cheated on his wife then said he wasn't gonna be with Tanya anymore but weeks and weeks went by and he didn't tell Tanya then cheated on bella with his wife...that man is a piece of shit and bella should never forgive him! she should have the baby a month early...and then give it to them...and move the fuck on with her life
jk chapter 16 . 6/19/2014
he just said that he USED to love his wife them says she never touched his heart...contradicting mother fucker. oh bella I love you your the mother of my child even though we never had sex and you only got pregnant so me and MY WIFE Could have a baby...
lets kill edweird it would make for a better story
jk chapter 15 . 6/19/2014
Oh really? your gonna leave your wife to be with bella? how convienant that you have a back up piece of shit! bella didn't want a fucking baby! so no NO she will not be the fucking mother of your child! she will give birth and hand you yours and TANYAS baby!
I hate fuckward
jk chapter 14 . 6/19/2014
bella seems so fucking desparate. I cant believe she forgave him for yelling out tanyas name...ON PURPOSE which made no since to me but anyway edweirds a total fucking ass in this. he asks his best friend to have his baby, he cheats on his wife, he hurts bella on purpose...hes a fuckin loser and bella needs to move the fuck on...have that baby give it to them and run the fuck away! to Jacob lol
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