Reviews for Tiny Heart
Guest chapter 9 . 5/9
What the hell was that? he just cum n shouts tanyas name for real? asshole
CallMeJazz chapter 3 . 5/9
For someone who is desperately needs bellas help tanya surely seems like a cold ignorant person. she doesn't even say thank you or show how appreciate she is when bella agree to have their baby. what an ungrateful b!tch
Diamond Dia chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
This story is very confusing. Tanya is dumb but she's a doctor. Is bella pregnant with her own egg or tanya. Bella was a virgin at the implantation but sudden before she sex with edward she sys she had sex in the past. Tanya abandon her in the city with no way back home. Im done.
jk chapter 22 . 6/19/2014
that's embarrassing as fuck! she hit her head repeatedly hahahahah god shes a fucktard cant even walk up steps god just kill her already shes so fucking worthless
jk chapter 20 . 6/19/2014
funny she could see that from her truck...why is edweird crying? he cheated on his wife then said he wasn't gonna be with Tanya anymore but weeks and weeks went by and he didn't tell Tanya then cheated on bella with his wife...that man is a piece of shit and bella should never forgive him! she should have the baby a month early...and then give it to them...and move the fuck on with her life
jk chapter 16 . 6/19/2014
he just said that he USED to love his wife them says she never touched his heart...contradicting mother fucker. oh bella I love you your the mother of my child even though we never had sex and you only got pregnant so me and MY WIFE Could have a baby...
lets kill edweird it would make for a better story
jk chapter 15 . 6/19/2014
Oh really? your gonna leave your wife to be with bella? how convienant that you have a back up mother...you piece of shit! bella didn't want a fucking baby! so no NO she will not be the fucking mother of your child! she will give birth and hand you yours and TANYAS baby!
I hate fuckward
jk chapter 14 . 6/19/2014
bella seems so fucking desparate. I cant believe she forgave him for yelling out tanyas name...ON PURPOSE which made no since to me but anyway edweirds a total fucking ass in this. he asks his best friend to have his baby, he cheats on his wife, he hurts bella on purpose...hes a fuckin loser and bella needs to move the fuck on...have that baby give it to them and run the fuck away! to Jacob lol
jk chapter 13 . 6/19/2014
that doesn't even make since...he called out tanyas name cause it would hurt bella less...LOL that's the stupidest shit ive ever heard..you have made me hate edweird! Now I want Jacob and bella together!
Jacob and bella!
Debbie White chapter 25 . 5/2/2014
Great story!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/22/2013
I can't read this shit anymore.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/22/2013
Are you kidding me right now?
Guest chapter 12 . 11/22/2013
Is she 14? I would press charges against her ass.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/22/2013
Welllllll...Tanya is his wife.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/22/2013
Your a great writer just not liking your Bella character, she has no readeemable qualities. She would cheat with Edward? She is pathetic
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