|Reviews for The Lesser Point of View|
| Akirina chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
| nekodreamstealer chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
wow...that was...marvelous. I never thought about the ten-year-old's point of view on it all before this, and this idea of what it must have been like for him...epic. simply epic, Tamdiu.
| Selene Appia chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
It's actually quite good for a first fic.
Sure, Artemis may be a little OOC, but only a little (I nearly didn't see it): it's just that I can hardly imagine him stamping his foot and muttering under his breath... The idea entering his brain, but actually doing it? Nah! far too plebian. And even then, it's the makes-you-smile OOCness.
The only thing I have a problem warping my mind around is (but that's a plothole on Colfer's part, and not yours) the fact that Butler and Mulch didn't remember Artemis' little trip in the future/past. Were they mind-wiped? And what about Opal?
Where was I ? Oh yes: nice fic. I hope you'll be writing more of them.
| aretiredfowl chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
LOL. I like the comment about Holly and Artemis. . .:D:D:D :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
| captin.holly.short chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
pretty good so far, keep up the good writing!