Reviews for In Dreams
TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 20 . 1/6/2012
Great chapter with the mention of the mysterious circumstances of Edward's unknown past, including his dead parents.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 19 . 1/6/2012
It was cute when Edward began to panic when he realized that Bella was no longer in his room.

I got a chuckle out of Edward's thoughts about Bella (being on her hands and knees scrubbing the floor) looking like she is from a scene from some porno - too funny! ;~D

Great chapter and story - well done - keep up the good work.

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Guest chapter 18 . 1/6/2012
OMFG, Mike basically raped Bella the one and only time that they had sex together - what a total scumbag! I'm glad that Edward and Jasper were to prevent him from doing so once again.

It was so sweet when Bella fixed up Edward's injuries from the fight with Mike; it was cute/sexy when she kissed his fingers when she was all done doctoring them up.

M.m.m., yummy details of the oral explorations between Edward and Bella. ;~D

VERY well written - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 17 . 1/6/2012
'Oh, and finally, to the reviewer who asked if I knew what the legal drinking age is...Yes, I do. ' Um, yeah, it is 21 years old, so I hope that Emmett made everybody turn their keys in so that there won't be any accidents due to drunken driving.

I'm glad that Edward found Bella before Mike got a chance to rape her.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 16 . 1/6/2012
Aww, this chapter was cute in that Bella and Edward are both insecure about the others feeling for them.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 15 . 1/6/2012
Aww, what a sweet combination for Edward... he is romantic (the snow heart), and creepily stalker-ish (his climbing the tree, then going into her room).

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 14 . 1/6/2012
Hmm, I'm glad that Emmett and Rosalie are getting along in that they are sitting together with his arm around her during the movie, and I'm glad that Bella and Edward now feel comfortable enough with the other that they have progress to hand holding.

Good chapter and story - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 13 . 1/6/2012
*::chuckling::* OMG, that was so embarrassing for Bella to have gotten caught looking into Edward's family's refrigerator.

I have never heard of the need to place, or keep, music CDs in the refrigerator.

It was too cool that Edward felt compelled to invite Bella to the party after her confession of also having been one to store her CDs in the refrigerator, back when she lived in Phoenix.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 12 . 1/5/2012
Ah, teenagers and their life crises, emotional issues, and other §hit too - I'm so glad that I haven't been one in ages. LOL

Good drama and angst - well written - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 11 . 1/5/2012
Mike Newton is such a sleaze for putting his hands on Bella to offer her comfort, or whatever, due to the accident the day before.

Good drama - well written - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 10 . 1/5/2012
Poor Edward for being so focused on how turned on he was due to Bella being atop of him that he left Emmett back at the hospital.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 9 . 1/5/2012
Whoa, very intense there when Charlie went after Edward with the misunderstand that Edward almost killed Bella due his driving too fast for conditions.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 8 . 1/5/2012
Great chapter and story - well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 7 . 1/5/2012
O.o.o. very exciting bit with the van taking out one of the skank twins. I truly was not expecting that would be the outcome, but I must say that I'm impressed and awed that you went there. ;~D

Well done - keep up the good work.

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TheMoreSmutTheBetter chapter 6 . 1/5/2012
I like how Rosalie is interested in Emmett, and he in her. I'm glad that Edward told Emmett about his dreaming about Bella for the last three months.

Well done - keep up the good work.

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