|Reviews for Timely Intervention|
| Alpenwolf chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Hahahaha, what an end for a mary-sue parody of a female saiyans
| abbbandonedaccount chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Dear God, I love this story. Good job! Sues irrit
| Hieiko chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
| skittlesthelizard chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I'm SO Guilty of writing suefics...NEVER posted any though. (Embarrsment.) Anyway this made me laugh so hard! XD
| Writer Of The Light chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
This was hilarious! Ignore the idiots who flamed you; if they had lives, then they wouldn't have taken the time to review.
| Marie Nomad chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Yes! A Mary Sue is finally put into her place. That's a really good fic. I love that Krillian saved the day with his quick thinking and genre savyness.
| Kakarot Son chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Ahahaha! That was hilarious
| Dominican Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
| Spirit of paladin chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Oh god... Oh god... this is incredibly funny! One of the best Mary Sue parodies I've read. Well done!
| Kingdom Hearts 3D rocks chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
rofl too funny!
hehehe, OCs with far too long names are stupid, i love this parody because it definitely tells us how impossible super saiyan level nine thousand is.
heheh, how amusing, the mary sue exploded after reaching super saiyan level nine thousand and two.
this made me laugh, i love it.
| aquasage chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
I don't which one your read...because you came up with a good one :D!
too bad it wasn't categorized as a Cell fanfic, or I wouldn't have missed this.
yep, some of the romance based ones (quite a lot) suck!
I like this parody! XD!
the clothing description was soo on par, how fights in designer heels! and Freeza's voice...o gahd, that that is anything but sexy!
her power up cry must be like a cat locked in a washer machine! on spin cycle!
I love this one shot!
| Kokoyumi chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
We share your annoyance with this trash known as the 'Sue-fic'. Our annoyance has abated slightly at this amusing parody of the 'Sue-fic'. We hope that you will continue writing, and that our amusement will continue as you do. You have our thanks.
Signed: Emperor Rilynnrretyn, Graced by the Light, Keeper of the Realm, Hold of the Keys, Standard-bearer of the Dawn, High Seat of House Rilynnrretyn, Master of the Magic Academy, Ruler of the lands graced by the touch of the Creator. Hallowed be his name.
| Remembering childhood chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Ha! I share your hate of Mary Sue fics... I have nothing against introducing a new character, just make it believable! This story was a good laugh.
| Saber Wing chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Ahahahahahahaha, brilliant, absolutely brilliant! I hate Mary Sue fics, and this is the perfect mockery of one XD. Super Saiyan level nine thousand...hehehe. That was so incredibly funny, I'm still laughing! Great fic!
| veerman chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Unorignal and more to the point uncreative, quite frankly a writer of your calbire should be looking to do more then just write a mary sue parody.