Reviews for Made It Through The Rain
FARISWHEEL chapter 7 . 1/2/2010
That was sad. I never knew how Kate died, but I thought she got shot in the head by Ari?
TesubCalle chapter 7 . 12/17/2009
Wow. I've seen the wishful-thinking "We never saw a body, damnit!" theories floating around in the aftermath of 'Grace Period', but this is the first fic I've read where someone actually tackled it.

I personally think you could have stretched things out and been more detailed, at least in the way of exploring the characters' thoughts and emotions. I'd have liked to have known more about the victim, suspects and culprits. But I say that only because the premise holds a lot of promise, and because there aren't nearly enough Paula Cassidy fics out there. You're also forgiven for killing her again... Grudginly...

If I have one complaint, it's that certain terms and phrases ('lift' and 'flat' as opposed to 'elevator' and 'apartment') are dead giveaways that you don't speak "American". (Truthfully, I don't either because I'm also not from the 'States, but the NCIS characters would never speak those words.

I loved Paula/Katelyn's response to Gibbs' question about what she was scared of, and I loved her defiance when Jordon was threatening her. Her last question to Gibbs and his response was priceless. Even though I would much rather have seen Paula and Ziva as friends, part of me wonders what might have happened if they ever got into a physical altercation. (Gibbs probably had it right: they'd need a lift to Emergency...)

Good job, and best of luck on all your future writing endeavours.
InsanityGoneMad chapter 7 . 9/22/2009
That was all really good, sorry I didn't reveiw some of the other chapters but my reveiw thing was stuffing up. But all the chapters were great!

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
That was really really good. Really liked the second last line.

Mx
InsanityGoneMad chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
That was really good. Sorry these reveiws are so short - I usually write short reveiws - but I have to get off the computer soon.

Mx
Ab55556 chapter 7 . 6/14/2009
im glad everyone made you complete it coz i really enjoyed reading the whole fic. and you said it would probably only be 6 chapters long!

i love the bits in italics, especially the bits about ziva not having a childhood

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Ab55556 chapter 6 . 6/14/2009
stop putting yourself down! its so great!

i love this one, the conversation is so good and enjoyable to read for a start

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Ab55556 chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
great emphasis on repeated word smiling, really gives a great effect as it is a serious scene so smiles are not expected.

i am probably the only person in the world who can make sense of that...

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Ab55556 chapter 4 . 6/14/2009
another fantastic ending!

this fic is so well worth reading!

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Ab55556 chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
im typing as fast as i can coz i want to get to the next chapter asap!

love the changes of scene in all the chapters, you do that really well

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Ab55556 chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
tony makes me laugh!

hope this review makes you feel better, i cant really describe how good you are, you have a raw talent and this is a great way to make yourself discovered by the public

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Ab55556 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
the last line is very dramatic!

i dont think its as easy to write these fics for such a big tv show as everyone seems to think it is, so keep it up, you're doing great!

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CheerChickx chapter 7 . 5/22/2009
Hey!

I've never read this fic before until now. It was good :)

The ending was fine and I get what you mean about not wanting to drag it out.

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OutCold chapter 7 . 5/22/2009
FINALLY! Yay! OK, I get that you had to kill Paula, and even if you were hurrying it, it was incredibly well done. Now you can continue the Campaign Trail. Loved it, know what you mean about the writers.
Tiva4evaxxx chapter 7 . 5/22/2009
Don't worry about me, i love all your writing, plus WW sounds good!

But great chapter, and i'm sad to see it come to an end.

NCIS is painful to watch at the moment, knowing what will happen...

But that was fantastic, sad, but fantastic.

Thanks for UDing, i'm gonna miss this fic!

And you're welcome.

:-)

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