|Reviews for Antithesis|
| MyNever chapter 10 . 1/17/2010
Better safe than sorry is what I say Edward! He's protective and cautious but not overbearing, and I love it.
It's just sadly ironic that they can't finally breathe easy with a less delicate Bella: "I was just tired of being afraid. I was durable now, a vampire like Edward, immortal. I wasn't supposed to be afraid all the time."
And funnily enough when Edward describes Rolle as an assassin among killer vamps I won't lie, I got a bit of a chill as well. Is it wrong to love an assassin? He's just so dreamy...
Love this story!
| ForksPixie chapter 13 . 1/8/2010
Amazing, Loved it...Will be recommending & good luck on the indies...You've got my vote.
I'll be running over to Absolucion now...can't get rid of me. LOL!
| ForksPixie chapter 7 . 1/7/2010
"Alice began giggling. "It's nothing. You look fine, Rolle. I just expect you to start singing the Gorton's Fisherman jingle."
"Or Old Spice," I added."
I laughed so hard...I cried!
You know once I finish, I'll be TweetQuoting this bad boy of a story! But until then, I'll just keep pimping it out!
Kodos for a great FanFic & Big Emmett Hugs for you!
Lili aka ForksPixie
| ForksPixie chapter 2 . 1/6/2010
LOVE it so much!
| paige morgan chapter 20 . 12/6/2009
I really and truly enjoyed this story. I love how you stayed very true to the characters and their personality traits. The thing I loved most about your story (which SM never really expresses deeply in her series) is the absolute and unwavering love the Cullens share as a family. It is such an amazing and unbreakable bond, it puzzles me. I was a joy to read about their undying affection for one another. The scene where they all crawled into bed together, just needing to touch each other and reassure themselves that everyone was safe was very sweet. Although none of them are related by blood (excuse the pun) they are bound by a much greater force, and I love it.
I was a little confused as to why Charlie was never mentioned. If ten years or so passed, is he still alive? Does Bella ever see him? Just things to consider for the sequel. Also, although you do not wish to include Renesmee in your story, I assure you that you would easily do her justice! Also, a little wolfy action might be nice too! Despite me wanting this, I realize that this is a story about Edward and Bella and protecting their relationship. Your writing is also very fluid and follows a logical thought pattern. Your banter between the Cullens is hilarious by the way!
Can't wait to read the sequel. Thanks for giving us readers such a thoughtful piece of work.
-Alicia Paige Morgan
| raizie chapter 20 . 12/6/2009
Great news. I've been reading tons of AH, and I'm ready to get back to the roots of why I am so captivated by Twilight. You do such a great job with canon vamps. I can't wait.
| baynewen chapter 20 . 12/6/2009
Oh this is going to be great I love Rolle!
| philadelphic chapter 20 . 12/6/2009
Yay! Great news!
| Milalencar chapter 8 . 11/10/2009
I think I only have time for this one more. But maybe I’ll find some free time later.
BOTH LEFT ME REELING AND WEAK-KNEED.
Now, I just need to find a man like that to spend the rest of my life with. ;)
"SURE I AM," I SMILED AGAINST HIS LIPS. "DIFFERENT KIND OF HELP."
I like this more equally balanced relationship they have after Bella is turned. Before Edward was too careful about everything and Bella too held back also.
"HIS THOUGHTS STUMBLED FROM BEING IN THE MOMENT WITH US, TO HIS BROKEN SIDE. AND HE THOUGHT, 'I GOT HERE FIRST'."
Wow! What is this? Trouble in the horizon, it seems.
"GUESS WHO'S GETTING THEIR CLOTHES RIPPED OFF WHEN THEY GET HOME TONIGHT," HE PREDICTED. "ALMOST MAKES ME WANT TO STAY HOME, BUT IT'LL ONLY GET BETTER IF I MAKE HER WAIT FOR IT A COUPLE HOURS."
I’d settle for one like this too. ;) LOL I love Emmett so much!
"CAIUS IS... ANXIOUS ABOUT YOUR FAMILY."
Ambitious people can never understand and trust those that are not. :(
THEY'RE LOOKING FOR EXCUSES AND REASONS TO WORRY ABOUT CARLISLE'S INFLUENCE. THEY'RE AFRAID OF HIM BECAUSE THEY DON'T UNDERSTAND HIM."
"IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, YOU SAY IT OUT LOUD. I AM NOT PLAYING THIS GAME ANY MORE. THIS IS MY FAMILY, TOO."
Well done! I hope they get that! :P Not fair at all
"ME?" I GASPED. MY MIND WAS SPINNING. WHY WOULD THE VOLTURI BE WORRIED ABOUT ME?
Because she has more power than anyone and she hasn’t even reached its full potential yet, right?
"DO NOT REFER TO CARLISLE'S FAMILY AS IF YOU ARE NOT PART OF IT!"
He is right. She just said the same thing two minutes ago. Tell her to stop that! :P
But wait… did she say that out loud? Is he just reading her mind all the time now?
Ah, you explain later. I guess I’m too eager and don’t wait for the next few lines. :P
"THAT'S WHY I CAME," ROLLE SAID. I'D ALMOST FORGOTTEN HE WAS STILL THERE. "I MADE A PROMISE TO A COUPLE OF HEARTSICK, LOVE-STRUCK GOOFBALLS. IT'S ABOUT TIME I EARNED MY KEEP."
That is kind of scary. If all that has already happen was not enough to bring him to them, but this is, it has to be very serious.
Hope I can get back to the rest soon. :)
| Milalencar chapter 7 . 11/10/2009
I’m back! :D
"HE'S ACTUALLY HAPPY," JASPER SAID, HIS VOICE AMAZED.
I bet that is a first, isnt it? Well, at least as far as Jasper knows. ;)
"HE PROBABLY WORKS FOR THE VOLTURI. I CAN'T IMAGINE ANY OF OUR KIND HAVING THAT... DISTINCT TITLE."
If they don’t even know, who gave him that title? Who said he was an assassin; does he introduce himself as one?
"ALL THREE OF THEM STARTED PLAYING. IT WAS LIKE OUR OWN CULLEN PHILHARMONIC."
That sounds like a spectacle! :D
I'VE NEVER FELT THIS KIND OF... I DUNNO, — HAPPINESS? CONTENTMENT? — FROM HIM BEFORE, THOUGH.
So there is my answer. LOL
EDWARD KISSED MY CHEEK AND TURNED ME IN HIS ARMS, PRESSING MY BACK TO HIS CHEST AND WINDING HIS ARMS AROUND MY STOMACH.
I really enjoy how loving they are with each other. It just exudes a wonderful and comfortable (although not boring) love.
INSOMNIA? REMEMBER? AWAKE TWENTY-FOUR HOURS A DAY FOR ETERNITY? LOTS OF TIME ON YOUR HANDS?
I bet there is more to that though. Music is his talent as much as anything else. ;)
EVEN EDWARD, WHO LOOKED FANTASTIC IN EVERYTHING IN MY HUMBLE OPINION, HAD NOT BEEN ABLE TO PULL OFF THE 'LOCAL' LOOK AS WELL AS ROLLE.
You know, sometimes I kind of forget Rolle is also the personification of sex on legs. ;) I love that picture you use as inspiration. It is like his pain is so heavy on him the beauty in him takes second place.
Hahahah I get what he is saying with that whole glimmer thing, but I still don’t really understand it. Guess it is just talent. :P
AFTER BEING FAMILY FOR SO LONG, I RECOGNIZED THE STRANGE EXPRESSION ON MY BROTHER'S FACE.
I FELT HIM TENSE.
What was that all about? I’m clueless right now. :P
I COULD TELL THAT ROLLE HAD NOTICED AND QUESTIONING CONCERN CREASED HIS BROW, BUT HE DID NOT ASK.
Well, I a lot more curious, so I’ll ask. What happened to Carlisle? I love the guy. Did something happen?
"HOW MANY ROPES ARE ON A SAILING VESSEL?"
This is going to be a trick question, isn’t it? LOL I bet they call the ropes something else. :P
"IT'S A TRICK QUESTION," I SAID ALOUD WITHOUT REALIZING IT.
Hahahahha Bella agrees with me. :D
"WHEN YOU'RE SERIOUS."
I 3 Rose for that answer. :D She sure knows how to flirt with class.
Next chapter should be interesting. We never see the Cullens mingling much in AU stories. :)
| latuacantante4him chapter 19 . 11/8/2009
I am so glad I "found" this story. I really enjoyed it. Rolle is such an interesting character. His mind is so different. It was interesting that Edward couldn't always get a clear "look" into it. The ending was perfect. :)
| latuacantante4him chapter 17 . 11/7/2009
Rolle's is such a sad story. Thanks for the extra's about him. :)
| latuacantante4him chapter 16 . 11/7/2009
*sob* So sad. Enjoyed it.
| latuacantante4him chapter 15 . 11/7/2009
Brought tears to my eyes. *sniff* Enjoyed it.
| latuacantante4him chapter 14 . 11/7/2009