Reviews for Bright Like the Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Finally we have real contact. Rose is a pain in the ass. Dr. Cullen is interesting. Jess is going to flip when she sees Bella in Edward's car. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It will be interesting to actually hear Edward say something, and to Bella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() These boys think they are getting somewhere with Bella, she got some surprises coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, the gossip. The boys are definitely fawning over Bella. What do the girls think about it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Jake definitely wants Bella! What's Edward's story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Edward afraid of the light? Vamp Edward would have been way more smooth about his exit. Hmmm... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww.. I really love your story! Hope you finish it. I really like B & E's quirkiness.. even if their kids will be weird. LOL.. But yeah, definitely have your story on alert! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is he a vampire or not I'm mad confused yo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though you clearly aren't posting anymore I still feel compelled to review your fic. I thought the connection you created with Edward and Bella was fantastic. Most writes just imply that their characters got alone, but you actually wrote out the dialogue for their interaction, showing how close they became. I really liked how the relationship progressed in the later chapters as well. However, it definetly did not deserve the "M" rating it received. I can understand a "T" for the swearing and suggested sexual content, but nothing too graphic actually occured. I'm definetly bumbed that you haven't continued. You had a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story.. i really hope you continue with it at some point.. its hillariouse ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read this story from start to finish, it was raining so I couldn't do washing anyway... Well that's my excuse for doing nothing all weekend... Except read this totally rockin story .. I loved it , I love your humor it's great. Would of loved to of read more. TFW |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to finish!? Because you should! I love how you portray Bella's character, she's do weird! I love that. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to update your story? It puts a smile on my face whenever I read it and to have it finished... would be great :) |
![]() ![]() Is Store bought cakes are: newton, Eric & Tyle Carrot cake :Jake Choclate cake with Green Icing : Edward? |