Reviews for Bright Like the Sun
PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 6 . 3/29/2009
i really liked this chapter

drugged up bella is funny

i loved the convo with bella and edward at the end

cant wait for more!
Leeshaann chapter 5 . 3/25/2009
MORE PLEASE LOTS MORE... SOON... UPDATE SOON...
PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 5 . 3/24/2009
i liked this chapter!

it was cool

cant wait for more!
dream-air chapter 5 . 3/19/2009
yeah...He is going to talk now!
The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 5 . 3/19/2009
interesting, this could get good! update soon!
UrbanBlaze chapter 5 . 3/19/2009
I loved the dialogue between Charlie and Bella when they were picking out comforters! I just felt myself cringing right along with her when she forgot to switch on her 'talking to parent' filter! Am so glad Edward saved her...am so looking forward to them having an actual conversation! Have loved the build up and tension between them so far, so it will be interesting to see what happens next!
VAL chapter 5 . 3/19/2009
so so good this story!

Can wait for next chapter. I have a feeling drugged Bella is going to be hilarious and pushy Edward will be scary...Bella might have to add a letter to his nickname :)
YankeeDiva chapter 5 . 3/18/2009
Heheeheheheh I missed this story and Oh it just got to the cliff and I'm hanging lol loved this chapter and the fact you gave Bella a sense of humor
PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 4 . 3/6/2009
i really really like this story and am excited to see where youre going with it

update soon!
dream-air chapter 4 . 3/5/2009
it is really good...
The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
This story is hilarous (i know i spelled that wrong but for the life of me i cant remember how to spell it lol sorry) i love bella! haha update soon!
lucygreydon chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
lol i love it. ur a great writer! very entertaining! lol i love it. update soon! D
YankeeDiva chapter 4 . 3/4/2009
LOVED the stare down it was two funny Bella giving herself the tough girl talk lol. Cannot wait for more in this!
UrbanBlaze chapter 3 . 2/19/2009
Like the story so far-good pace and nice storyline. However, it would be good to maybe have some sort of clear break in the writing, (i.e. a dividing line or something) when there's a time or place change in the story, as sometimes it's a little confusing reading one line then in the next line something completely different is happening. Can't wait to read more! xoxo
AnUnbrokenHorse aka RushtonElf chapter 3 . 2/19/2009
You don't need to ask, cos I'm going to review anyway...

Great story, great chapter... I only have great things to say about this story!
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