|Reviews for Make Believe Marriage|
| andysanime chapter 5 . 10/1/2011
Really good job on this story.
| Midnight Fantasia Goddess chapter 5 . 12/6/2010
Awesome job, loved the story. :)
| angelrider13 chapter 5 . 11/5/2010
I'll be honest. I didn't think I would like this fic much when I found out you turned Kai into a girl. But I took a chance and kept reading (partly to see it Kaze would get her face punched in, she didn't, but...I think I can live with what she got). And what do you know! I loved it!
It was really well written and I have to admit that I rather enjoyed it. Great job and thanks for posting this!
| erikamakino chapter 5 . 7/3/2010
Love it!I usually dislike and find it weird of Kai being a female but I changed my mind when I read Kai totally rocked in bashing that bloody OC!:) Serves Kaze right!
And I don't understand the other authors and fans of Beyblade that claim that Kai's birthday is December/November 16 or whatever date, when it is actually on August 2, OFFICIALLY stated by the AUTHOR:TAKAO AOKI. As if they created Kai!
I've read your thread at the forums by the way and I loved it!It really changed my POV over beyblade fanfic stories. For I've been reading a whole lot of KaiXOC stories (Kai being my fave character) which amuses me a little but really had enough of. Sick of reading Kai falling impossibly,insanely and immediately in love on another character. *Sigh*
Well,am gonna read your other anti-oc stories for I love them!And keep making more!10-thumbs up! :D
| coffeeandspite chapter 5 . 6/14/2010
okay there are like 3 things i have to say 1. this is the first fem!kai story i have actully read.. and i LOVED it! 2. loved how you bashed the oc! XD and 3. well there isn just thought it would sound cooler if i put '3 things' story was amazing! CX
| Yoko Fujioka chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
neh, neh, sempai, any chance i could use this plot myself?
I won't be copying it of course, just using the general idea :x
| kaitouahiru chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
Yay, an update! I like this chapter and it's about time Kaze got her just deserts! Congrats on finishing it!
| DarkBombayAngel chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
Go Kai and Tala! It's really cool seeing them rip Kaze apart. It's really sad to see this story end. Really good though.
| angelvan105 chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
it was amazing story this is plus kai and tala sure know how to do with kaze out of there! super awesome job!
| van chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
wow great new chapter it was awesome!
| CleverPhoenix chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
WOO! GO TALA AND KAI FOR KICKING KAZE'S BUTT! I love how it ended and how Kaze just fell apart, she really deserved it. The description rocked and Tala's timing was perfect. I can't wait until your next update or story!
| Rapunzelle chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
That was such a good story. Its sad to see it end. Cannot wait for more stories from you.
| G-Wing Gurl chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
hahahahaha Kaze got what she deserved tossed to the curb like the scum she is
i loved it your writing is amazing cant wait for updates and new stories
oh and i thought of another cliche
this one is super annoying
some random girl showing up claiming to be pregnant with Kai's (or any of the other guys) baby
please update soon
| kaitouahiru chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one- can't wait for Kai to give Kaze a piece of her mind-
| angelvan105 chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
wow i can wait that kai tell kaze everything so she can straight kaze out so she can understand it misunderstand the whole time! wow this story is best keep it up!