Reviews for Towers
Gigglepud chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I don't think the ending was abrubt before, and I would have never thought about the fact that Kalasin I died in a tower, nice job. Love it
DomLuver chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
a bit short and abrubt, but still quite good
Madame Star chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
This is really nice. There aren't alot of J/T pieces out there, thanks. :)
Anonymus chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
that was so good! great story!
Tortall101 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
It ended a bit abruptly but it's a good idea :)
snow and the sea chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Paragraphing! Every time a new person speaks, you have to start a new paragraph!


Jon: "hi"


Jon:"how are you"


Please don't put yourself down! Positive thinking, people!

And SHOW don't TELL!


Tears poured out of Hana's eyes. (show)


Hana was crying. (tell)

See the difference?

Keep writing! And THINK POSITIVE! wAstxd x