Reviews for Towers
Gigglepud chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
I don't think the ending was abrubt before, and I would have never thought about the fact that Kalasin I died in a tower, nice job. Love it
DomLuver chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
a bit short and abrubt, but still quite good
Madame Star chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
This is really nice. There aren't alot of J/T pieces out there, thanks. :)
Anonymus chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
that was so good! great story!
Tortall101 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
It ended a bit abruptly but it's a good idea :)
snow and the sea chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Paragraphing! Every time a new person speaks, you have to start a new paragraph!

Eg;

Jon: "hi"

Thayet:"hi"

Jon:"how are you"

Yeah?

Please don't put yourself down! Positive thinking, people!

And SHOW don't TELL!

Eg;

Tears poured out of Hana's eyes. (show)

versus:

Hana was crying. (tell)

See the difference?

Keep writing! And THINK POSITIVE! wAstxd x