|Reviews for The Coward|
| SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Too much flowery, not enough clarity.
It's also wrong. Draco should be drawn and quartered. ;-)
| blood sugar love chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
I can't even begin to tell you how lovely this was.
| with-a-flower-in-her-hair chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
I like it, I think... I'm not entirely sure I understand all of it though - probably just me being silly. You're describing life right? With the soap? If you are then that I like a lot. If not, mind explaining it to me, pretty please?
And what exactly happened in the ending? Please, please correct me if I'm wrong - to me it read like Harry and Draco were looking at eachother from across a train platform or something, and Draco stepped off the edge...
Few too many metaphors for me, if I'm honest - sorry! - but I really would like to know what exactly it was that you were writing.
| DeliaDee chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
I'm not quite sure what to make of this. I understand what Draco is feeling and like how you've expressed his emotions. There is just so much metaphor that the ending is completely unclear. What exactly happened? I would really like to know.