I really thought the Snape/Buffy thing was going to be just a one off or maybe a couple spurts. I really thought Sev was going to find out Giles fancied him or something, and be all torn up about it because he really loves Giles but is actually very heterosexual but then remember he has the sexuality changing potion and take it so that he can get it on with Giles.
Well done, author, if you still keep an eye out for comments on this lol. You’re probably some artist of some sort in your own right now; you’re very creative and, at least with writing, productive!

Willow is acting way too childish at times, she's 19 not 12.
That kind of put me off.

OHHHHH
the twist at the end- love it!
The Weasley family have really good chemistry and omg harry and ginny are so cutee

So.. are you seriously making Willow straight? And the fuck? Why go through all the Harry Potter bullshit, just tell her she has family that thought her dead, and here is a magic ritual you can do to confirm that. Everything else is unnecessary.

yay, scoobies

interesting intro. with everyone alive in the 1st chapter I'm going to assume this is canon divergent from early in the HP series, like 4th year or something, but it would be nice to have an author note to explain

I didn't like that Buffy got kicked out for defending herself. Otherwise a good story.

I wonder how many fictional people are either real or based on real people. Remember the TV show Dallas I am told there was a real Ewing family (A lot of people, especially in Texas have the surname Ewing.

I think this is going really good so far. Good job!

Hi...I really love this story and I was wondering if you wouldn’t mind reading mine and letting me know what you think...please...I would really appreciate it if you could...here is my Wattpad account...
user/MaryFox-7376/activity
The story’s name is ‘Like ashes we fall’ and it’s also about missing Weasley girls but I also added a few other characters...just let me know if you can...

finally finished!

I really want Giles to bring up Jenny Calendar in this chapter. It would be good for him to have someone to talk to about her.

I like this story, so, reading it again in my holidays.

Please write more.

Wow wow wow absolutely amazing.

Imagine this same story but having Cornelia being the missing daughter, or anyone outside the trio. Would that person go to the trio and ask for help or ...?