I liked the Hot Lip service line. That was the one thing in this chaoter that had me cracking up. And I must say, I neve expected for Xander and Cordelia to end up together again.

Erin

I loved that Dumbledore caught Snape and Buffy, and I am glad that you allowed for them to continue this strange buyt cool... thing they have going. I like the introduction of Lorne, which makes me wish that Faith would get to Hogwarts too.

Erin

I love the Buffy/Snape pairing. They are my least favorite characters, but the thought of them together for some reason seems to work for me.

Erin

I really thought this was a cool chapter because of the fact that Snape and buffy FINALLY KISSED! I hoped there would be more of them, but it appears not if your ramblings are true. Sad. I am glad that the truth came out finally to the Weasleys, and I am glad that happened. I loved Anya in this, and I oddly am rooting for the Dumbledore/Anya paring too just because it is different, but it seems to work in its own way.

Erin

I am glad that Hermione and Willow didn't break up. I loved that Dawn thought to put them in the same room together, I would bet anything that Buffy saw herself making out with Snape, lol. I am still rooting for them.

Erin

This was pretty cool. Dawn as a pick pocket. I love it, and I like that Snape is feeling for Buffy and it is annoying him more than Buffy herself does, lol.

Erin

That was the best chapter EVER! This chapoter was seriosuly made the rest of the story! I loved show Dawn and Duncan interacted, how now he knows about Glory, how he is willing to do weird and rediculous things for Dawn like take the potion and deal with Snapey. I loved to bits how you wrote baby Buffy! And what she said to Snaoe is so cute. It reminds me of 'They're only messing with you because they like you." I can see Buffy like that with Snape. She resects him and doens't REALLY dislike him, but doesn't want anyone to konw that, lol. And I think I forgot to mention that I love what she said to Snape. I am now rooting for them as a couple, and I can't wait to see what happens if or when Buffy finds out about the robes.

Erin

I liked the last part of the chapter, and I am enjoying how you put parts of the chapter in Ben's perspective. I hope that there is a way to seperate Ben and Glory, but that is just my wishful thinking.

Erin

I like the whole Love... er quadrant. I like that Willow and Hermione are doing the whole matchmaking theing. I love that Snape is jealous because, though annoying to him, Buffy is no longer focusing her attention on him. I like that Duncan and Dawn are going to try the Polyjuice, which I hope means it goes slightly wrong and only fu could come from that. I am hoping for Percy/Amy, even though Iw as originally rooting for Ron/Amy. I am not sure how I would feel about Buffy/Sirius, but we'll see how you handle this. I am just happy you still have my Hermione/Willow pairing. I hope they don't break up.

Erin

I really love the role you gave flitwick in this chapter. The fact that spike has mentioned more than once that he is gay is so funny. And the added subtext of his words too. I only wish he get someone in the end, too! And the best name for Snape so far? Mr. Cranky Ass. I love it. Followed closely by Crankentien.

Erin

I love this chapter because you captured the Buffy/Snape rivalry again, and I loved how you wrote Anya. I really could hear her in my head.

Erin

YESS! The chapter I have been waiting for! I love you spike for beinging me the chapter I have wanted to read forEVER! And Dawn being mean to duncan for watching out for her. Poor guy. I had fun reading this chapter.

Erin

"As much as it would thrill me, I'm afraid I'll have to say I'm not up for breaking the broken hearted,"

I really liked that line a lot. I love how Spike keeps reminding people that Hermiohne has a thing for Willow, because I am rooting for Willow/Hermione so hard. There are parts of this story that must have been added or I just completely forgot. But the washed hair of Snape, I remember. I love how you spoke of buffy as a teacher through the eyes of her mentor. Great chapter over all, and I relly love the other new character, Nicola. Sounds like Dawn has some good friends in Hogwarts, people her age, and she seems happy there. The fact that she gets to do potions must be cool for her too. Gives her her own niche'. I think it is funny that while the younger Summers is like Snapes teacher's pet, the older Summers is like the opposite, someone what pesters him, lol. Great chapter.

With the mention of Tara, I am a little confused, because I had assumed this store took place right before she had supposedly met her, but I am not sure now. Oh well, I like the fact that Tara was her secret.

I loved the fact that Hermione stole Spike's clothes and Dawn and Duncan were sneaking about. I like Duncan. A very good OC in my opinion. Very likeable guy, nice, good, believable character that I would be sad to see die.

Erin

I don't care, I would never ever agree to strip poker with a bunch of teachers. I don't care how young they might look. Ick factor! I did, though love reading Dawn and Buffy talk about Snape. That was pretty funny scene.

Erin