|Reviews for The Color of the Abyss|
| Soul Raider 116 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Short, but very well written.
| Little Minamino chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Aw, poor Tobei. Don't worry, Itsuki is stronger then that, besides she'd kill you if you even tried to touch her - Anywho, I liked this, in an angsty-morbid kind of way. Keep up the good work!
| foolish intentions chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
You got Tobei's character and inner conflict down real well...but what about expanding on his rage and emotion a little more next time? I dunno. Maybe a little more depth...maybe not. What does it mean "face crumbling in amusement"? Maybe you could expand on that? Is the "this isn't happening" part Tobei's thoughts? If so, I recommend using italics... Urk. I don't want to come off sounding like a know-it-all...