Reviews for Parallels
DeeStruction chapter 1 . 2/2/2010

I think I was starting to feel some Stockholm Syndrome. And I wasn't even kidnapped.

He really did just seem like a lonely man didn't he?


Strange how the mind works.

Wonderful story btw, I love how thier personalities change. Absolutely wicked.

Well done.
IrishLoveForever chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Interesting story! I loved it and the ending!
SillyGranade chapter 1 . 1/20/2010

Featherbrained chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
That was the creepiest thing ever. And I loved it!

I was not expecting that ending... Very good story.
Courtney37 chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
wow that was just WOW, you may not have intended for it to be Creepy but that was CREEPY as hell. god I'm still shivering. Weird but very well written. would make an awesome horror movie. thanks bye
kiki-twilighter-ever chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
wow! very poweful. i abosulely loved it! u r amazing.
ImmortalMonkeyX chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
"I'm his Daaughter."?

Kinda Creepy

you almost made me feel sorry for James

Well done

i really enjoyed reading this.

*Claps* for you
masochisticlionlover0620 chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
oh creepy... I blame Bella. the weak link.
HyperPixiexoxo chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Poor Bella and Edward- I would've died if anything like that happened to me- getting kidnapped- at least they weren't raped.
StardustPhoenix chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Oh. My. God. Creepiest thing ever...I loved The story was good, the ending chilled me.
letmesign chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
This was beyond disturbing. Realistic, in their reactions and psychological issues...but still damn disturbing. Very interesting idea, though.
Aganippe chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Well, that sucks. That means that if they actually want to be normal, they have to be appart. But to be together, they have to be different people.

But the story was great, I can't wait for another one. Actually, I was kind of hoping you'd continue this one.
het2468 chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
I loved it! You did a great job; the story plot was excellent!
twilight-is-lovee chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
That sure was... interesting, to say the least.


The last part creeped me out.

Sure, I'm happy they're together, married, and expecting, but Bella saying that she's James's daughter? Creepy.
Hey Weirdo chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
I didn't think it was creepy at all.

It was different reading about people "relapsing" with Stockholm Syndrome.

Nonetheless, I liked the story.
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